Question

7．假如你是李華．英國交換生Peter在你班完成了為期一年的學習，現已回國．根據兩校協議，你將到英國學習一年．請給Peter寫一封電子郵件，詢問以下事宜：
1．對方近況；
2．交換生安排；
3．該校情況．
注意：
1．詞數100左右；
2．可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；
3．郵件開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數．
Dear Peter，
How is everything going on？I can imagine you enjoying yourself with your former friends now．I miss the time we spent together in our class．
Fortunately，I have got the chance to study in your school for a year．So I'd like to know how the exchange students'study and life are arranged in your school，especially the courses to be given．（高分句型一）In addition，I want to learn more about your school so that I can be familiar with the environment．（高分句型二）Meanwhile，having known me well，would you please give me some advice on how I can get well prepared for the study and life in your school？（高分句型三）
I would appreciate it if you could give me an early reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據提示信息假如你是李華．英國交換生Peter在你班完成了為期一年的學習，現已回國．根據兩校協議，你將到英國學習一年．請給Peter寫一封電子郵件，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：對方近況；交換生安排；該校情況．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態、語態．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：enjoy yourself過得愉快；Fortunately幸運的是；especially 尤其，特別；In addition另外；be familiar with對…熟悉；Meanwhile同時；get well prepared for很好地準備；
So I'd like to know how the exchange students'study and life are arranged in your school，especially the courses to be given．（高分句型一）
In addition，I want to learn more about your school so that I can be familiar with the environment．（高分句型二）
Meanwhile，having known me well，would you please give me some advice on how I can get well prepared for the study and life in your school？（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Peter，
       How is everything going on？I can imagine you enjoying yourself with your former friends now．I miss the time we spent together in our class．
       Fortunately，I have got the chance to study in your school for a year．So I'd like to know how the exchange students'study and life are arranged in your school，especially the courses to be given．（高分句型一）In addition，I want to learn more about your school so that I can be familiar with the environment．（高分句型二）Meanwhile，having known me well，would you please give me some advice on how I can get well prepared for the study and life in your school？（高分句型三）
       I would appreciate it if you could give me an early reply．
                                                                             Yours，
                                                                             Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．