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15．下面這幅圖片展現(xiàn)了女兒為媽媽洗腳的情景．請(qǐng)根據(jù)你對(duì)這幅圖片的理解用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文．
你的短文應(yīng)包含以下內(nèi)容：
1．描述圖片內(nèi)容；如情景、人物、動(dòng)作等等；
2．結(jié)合自身實(shí)際；談?wù)勀愕母邢耄?br />3．舉例說(shuō)明你該怎樣孝敬父母．
注意：1．不要做簡(jiǎn)單描述，可參照下面文章開頭所給提示，發(fā)揮想象；
2．詞數(shù)100左右，開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Respecting the elderly is the virtue of our country．The picture shows us a moving moment when a mother is washing her mother's feet，with her daughter helping out with a fan in her hand．（高分句型一）
All this reminds me of my mother，a general worker，who has a heavy burden of household and work．（高分句型二）But she still has much concern for me．On the contrary，I seldom pay attention to what mother needs and feels，always thinking what I could do in return is studying．（高分句型三）
Now I can help with the everyday washing，bedroom cleaning，or at least prepare breakfast myself，so as to share my mother's daily burden．Meanwhile，I think the best way to show respect and kindness to parents is to finish the task of study well and remember to care about our parents as well．．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息下面這幅圖片展現(xiàn)了女兒為媽媽洗腳的情景．請(qǐng)根據(jù)你對(duì)這幅圖片的理解用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點(diǎn)包括：描述圖片內(nèi)容；如情景、人物、動(dòng)作等等；結(jié)合自身實(shí)際；談?wù)勀愕母邢�；舉例說(shuō)明你該怎樣孝敬父母．
2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：remind sb of sth使某人想起某事；On the contrary相反的是；pay attention to關(guān)注；in return作為回報(bào)；at least至少；Meanwhile同時(shí)；care about關(guān)心；
The picture shows us a moving moment when a mother is washing her mother's feet，with her daughter helping out with a fan in her hand．（高分句型一）
  All this reminds me of my mother，a general worker，who has a heavy burden of household and work．（高分句型二）
But she still has much concern for me．On the contrary，I seldom pay attention to what mother needs and feels，always thinking what I could do in return is studying．（高分句型三）

解答 Respecting the elderly is the virtue of our country．The picture shows us a moving moment when a mother is washing her mother's feet，with her daughter helping out with a fan in her hand．（高分句型一）
      All this reminds me of my mother，a general worker，who has a heavy burden of household and work．（高分句型二）But she still has much concern for me．On the contrary，I seldom pay attention to what mother needs and feels，always thinking what I could do in return is studying．（高分句型三）
      Now I can help with the everyday washing，bedroom cleaning，or at least prepare breakfast myself，so as to share my mother's daily burden．Meanwhile，I think the best way to show respect and kindness to parents is to finish the task of study well and remember to care about our parents as well．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．