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16．假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華，你的美國筆友Chris在給你的郵件中提到他最近在準備SAT考試（美國高考），心理壓力很大，很苦惱，希望得到你的幫助．請你給他回信，內容包括：
1．安慰對方；
2．分析心理壓力過大會導致的后果；
3．給出相應的建議及其理由．
注意：詞數不少于150．
Dear Chris，
I'm sorry to learn that you've been under a lot of pressure lately due to the upcoming SAT test．（高分句型一）Anyone in your situation would suffer a certain amount of stress．But don't worry too much，or you may find yourself having problems with sleep，appetite，or even memory．Here are some ways I think that can deal with stress．
The first thing you can try is to exercise．Exercises like walking or running not only boost energy but also build confidence．（高分句型二）Another way is to enjoy some games with friends，which can take your mind off the stress and make you more relaxed．It might also be a good idea to talk to someone who is a good listener； having someone to listen to your problems can make you feel better．（高分句型三）
I believe it will all work out．Cheer up!Let me know if I can help further．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據提示信息假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華，你的美國筆友Chris在給你的郵件中提到他最近在準備SAT考試（美國高考），心理壓力很大，很苦惱，希望得到你的幫助．請你給他回信，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：安慰對方；分析心理壓力過大會導致的后果；給出相應的建議及其理由．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態、語態．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：be under  pressure 處于壓力之中；due to由于；deal with 應對，處理；not only，but also不僅，而且；Cheer up振作起來；
 I'm sorry to learn that you've been under a lot of pressure lately due to the upcoming SAT test．（高分句型一）
Exercises like walking or running not only boost energy but also build confidence．（高分句型二）
It might also be a good idea to talk to someone who is a good listener； having someone to listen to your problems can make you feel better．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Chris，
       I'm sorry to learn that you've been under a lot of pressure lately due to the upcoming SAT test．（高分句型一）Anyone in your situation would suffer a certain amount of stress．But don't worry too much，or you may find yourself having problems with sleep，appetite，or even memory．Here are some ways I think that can deal with stress．
      The first thing you can try is to exercise．Exercises like walking or running not only boost energy but also build confidence．（高分句型二）Another way is to enjoy some games with friends，which can take your mind off the stress and make you more relaxed．It might also be a good idea to talk to someone who is a good listener； having someone to listen to your problems can make you feel better．（高分句型三）
       I believe it will all work out．Cheer up!Let me know if I can help further．
                                                                                                                            Yours，
                                                                                                                            Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．