Question

寫一篇請(qǐng)求加入觀鳥(niǎo)協(xié)會(huì)的申請(qǐng)（80字左右）
你叫李明，陽(yáng)光中學(xué)八年級(jí)學(xué)生
最喜愛(ài)的科目是生物，對(duì)各種鳥(niǎo)類植物感興趣
想成為觀鳥(niǎo)協(xié)會(huì)的一員，了解更多鳥(niǎo)類知識(shí)
做點(diǎn)事保護(hù)鳥(niǎo)類，星期日下午2-5點(diǎn)可以參加活動(dòng)
Dear Chairperson ,
I would like to join the Birdwatching Society.
First,__________________________________________________________________________
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I will be very happy if I can become a member of the Birdwatching Society. My telephone number is 5558-6930.
Yours sincerely,
Liming

Answer 1

Dear Chairperson ,
I would like to join the Birdwatching Society.
First，My favourite subject is biology at school，I’m interested in all kinds of birds. I think interest is best teacher.But the knowledge about birds is less in biology class. I want to know more about birds.
Second，some people killed birds and they don’t know the importance of protecting the birds. The kinds of birds are smaller and smaller. In order to keep the balance of nature, I should try my best toprotect birds and our environment.I have lots of time to work on Sundays.
I will be very happy if I can become a member of the Birdwatching Society. My telephone number is 5558-6930.
yours sincerely,
Liming

試題分析：這是一封申請(qǐng)信，首先要用正確的格式去寫，會(huì)用一些短語(yǔ)，了解英語(yǔ)的句子結(jié)構(gòu)與漢語(yǔ)的不同，需要平時(shí)對(duì)課本上的課文要正確地理解，會(huì)仿照課文的句子寫出正確的英語(yǔ)句子，這里是在信中介紹自己的興趣和保護(hù)鳥(niǎo)類的決心，注意用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，用第一人稱來(lái)敘述。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】短文用了一些短語(yǔ)和固定句式，為文章增色不少，如：I’m interested in all kinds of birds. I think interest is best teacher. In order to keep the balance of nature, I should try my best to protect birds and our environment.等，為了上下文的銜接還用了一些過(guò)渡詞如：First，Second等。