Question

初中三年的學校生活結束了；回顧三年的學校生活；你(Jack)感慨萬分。校園網的英語論壇開辟了“My School Life”專欄,供同學們發表感言。請你為該專欄寫一篇短文，回顧自己三年的學校生活。

短文主要包括：回顧、感謝、祝愿等：回顧應涉及到生動有趣的課堂、和藹可敬的老師，活潑可愛的同學，豐富多彩的活動，自己的優點及不足等，你可以適當發揮。

要求；字數在90詞左右，第一句已經給出，不記入總數。文中不得出現真實姓名及班級。

I'm lucky to study in this beautiful school. _________________________________________________________________

Jack from Class 3

 

Answer 1

【答案】

I' m lucky to study in this beautiful school. The teachers are great. They always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. The classmates are lovely and friendly. The school life is rich and colorful. They make me happy every day.

In the past three years, I am hardworking and have made great progress. I do well in the exams. I am good at communicating and I like to make friends with others.

However, I have problems, too. I will spend less time online. I will do more sports and become stronger.

Thank you my teachers and classmates. Wish my school more beautiful, my teachers and classmates a happy life!

Jack from Class 3

【解析】本文是回顧過去的生活，一定要注意使用的時態，以現在時為主，在審題時，審清要點，不要有遺漏，字數較少，所以寫作時要緊扣要點，稍做適當的發揮，注意使用高級的詞匯和合適的連接詞，以使文章更流暢。