Question

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在此處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出修改的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在其下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2.只允許修改10處，多者（從十一處起）不計分。
One afternoon Jack is walking lonely down a river．It was very cold and on the river few boat could be seen. When he stopped on a bridge and look down, he saw a terrible scene．A boy fell out a boat and was struggling in water. Without think about himself, Jack jumped into the river and to save the boy．He was about to drag the boy to the river bank when he saw some people stand in a motor boat under the bridge. One of them stared at Jack and said angry, “They are making a film and you’ve spoiled a whole afternoon’s work!”  

Answer 1

One afternoon Jack is walking lonely down a river．It was very cold and
Was（文章講述的是過去的事情）    alone（alone表示單獨）
on the river few boat could be seen. When he stopped on a bridge and
boats（boat是可數(shù)名詞，這里用復數(shù)）
look down, he saw a terrible scene．A boy fell out ∧a boat and was
looked（文章文章講述的是過去的事情）       of（固定詞組fall out of從…掉下去）
struggling in water. Without think about himself, Jack jumped into the
thinking （介詞后面接動名詞）                    
river and to save the boy．He was about to drag the boy to
去掉（直接接不定式表示目的）
the river bank when he saw some people stand in a motor
standing（看見某人正在做某事）
boat under the bridge. One of them stared at Jack and said angry, “They
angrily（副詞修飾動詞）  We（根據(jù)句意…）
are making a film and you’ve spoiled a whole afternoon’s work!”   

解析【小題1】is改成Was（文章講述的是過去的事情）
【小題1】lonely改成alone（alone表示單獨，lonely表示“孤單”）
【小題1】boat改成boats（boat是可數(shù)名詞，few后面用可數(shù)名詞復數(shù)）
【小題1】look改成looked（文章文章講述的是過去的事情）
【小題1】out后面加of（固定詞組fall out of從…掉下去）
【小題1】think改成thinking （介詞后面接動名詞）
【小題1】去掉and（直接接不定式表示目的）
【小題1】stand改成standing（看見某人正在做某事see sb doing）
【小題1】angry改成 angrily（副詞修飾動詞stared at）
【小題1】They 改成 We（根據(jù)句意：我們在拍電影…）