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基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作（共15分）

李安在第85屆奧斯卡中再次獲得“最佳導(dǎo)演”，引起熱烈討論。假如你是校報(bào)小記者，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下文的提示，寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于李安的報(bào)道。

[寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容]

基本信息：李安，1954年生于臺(tái)灣，國(guó)內(nèi)外著名華人電影導(dǎo)演

經(jīng)歷：

1. 1979年前往美國(guó)追求 (pursue) 電影夢(mèng)，但畢業(yè)后找不到工作；

2. 6年后才拍攝 (shoot) 第一部電影《推手》（Pushing Hands），大獲成功；

名聲漸長(zhǎng)，開(kāi)始嘗試不同風(fēng)格的電影。

成就：近年來(lái)多次獲得最佳導(dǎo)演獎(jiǎng)，被美國(guó)雜志評(píng)為最偉大的導(dǎo)演之一。

[寫(xiě)作要求]

只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容；

2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Li An, who was born in Taiwan in 1954, is a well-known Chinese film director from home and abroad. He went to America to pursue his dream of film in 1979, but unfortunately, Li An remained unemployed after graduation. It was six years later that he shot his first film "Pushing Hands", which was a great success. As he became increasingly famous, he began to direct films of diverse styles. In recent years, having been awarded the Best Director for many times, he was acknowledged as one of the greatest directors by an American magazine. 

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái).本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。因?yàn)橹荒苁褂?個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容，所以盡量用復(fù)合句：如：Li An, who was born in Taiwan in 1954, is a well-known Chinese film director from home and abroad.這是定語(yǔ)從句，It was six years later that he shot his first film "Pushing Hands", which was a great success.這里用了強(qiáng)調(diào)句和定語(yǔ)從句

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于提綱類作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。