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IV. 寫作(共兩節，滿分40分)
第一節：基礎寫作（滿分15分）
[寫作內容]
請根據以下的情景說明，使用5個規范的句子描述全部所給的信息內容。
假設你是一名導游，將帶團到廣東霞山。出發前你對美國游客們簡單介紹
當天的行程和其他事項。
(1)、霞山位于廣東北部，距廣州280公里，乘車6小時；
(2)、在韶關市停留一小時，吃午飯；
(3)、下午5點到南雄，晚宿南雄賓館，第二天去游玩霞山；
(4)、路途遙遠，艱難，但沿途你會介紹美景和趣聞讓游客忘記疲勞。
[寫作要求]
(1)只能使用5個句子介紹以上全部內容；       (2)短文的開頭已為你寫好。
[評分標準］句子結構的準確性和復雜度；信息內容的完整性和連貫性。Ladies and gentlemen,
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Ladies and gentlemen,
Xia Mountains, about 280 kilometers away from Guangzhou, is located in the north of Guangdong Province. It will take us 6 hours to get there. At noon, stopping in Shaoguan City for an hour to have our lunch, we will reach another city — Nanxiong at 5 o’clock in the afternoon and for the night there, and, by the way, we will climb Xixia Mountains next morning.
Although the trip to Xia Mountains is a bit long and difficult, the beautiful scenery and interesting things on the way will catch you eyes and help get rid of your tiredness. Besides, from time to time, I’ll give you a brief account of Xia Mountains.

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