Question

假設你是李華，在一個禮品網站為你的姐姐訂購了一份生日禮物。禮物是一個標有姓名、生日及祝福語的有卡通動物形象的粉色杯子。收到禮物后你和姐姐都很滿意。請給你的英國筆友Johnson發一封郵件，內容包括以下要點：
1.描述網購的禮物； 2.介紹網上支付及配送情況； 3.談談你對網上購物的看法。
注意：1.詞數120--150左右；開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數；
2.可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
3.支付寶安全控件 Alipay Security Control
Dear Johnson,
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I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua                                                 

Answer 1

One possible version
Dear Johnson,
I ordered a birthday gift for my sister on the internet three days ago. It is a beautiful pink cup decorated with my sister’s name, her date of birth, and some best wishes to her as well. It’s so lovely a cup with a picture of a cartoon dog on it that both my sister and I likes it at the first sight.
Besides, I am very satisfied with Alipay Security Control, which is very convenient and safe. And so is the delivery service. I have received the cup within two days. Don’t you think it’s very fast?
I have enjoyed shoppingonline very much through this experience ,. There is no doubt that more and more people prefer shopping online nowadays .We don’t have to spend much time going to the shops or markets with such a good variety of choices on the internet. Agree with me?
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

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