Question

【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：

1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Last weekend, my classmate and I went on a camping trip near the river. It was not long distance, so we chose to get here by bike.

We started with early in the morning. On the way, we talked about that we saw around. It takes about half an hour to get to the place. On arriving, some girls sat down, had her breakfast and listened to the birds sings. Some admired the river while others drew pictures. My friends and I found a quietly place and went fishing. To our surprise, we got much fishes.

Time passed so quickly and we had to say goodbye. I enjoyed the pleasant or exciting trip.

Answer 1

【答案】

Last weekend, my and I went on a camping trip near the river. It was not long distance, so we chose to get here by bike.

We started with early in the morning. On the way, we talked about we saw around. It about half an hour to get to the place. On arriving, some girls sat down, had breakfast and listened to the birds . Some admired the river while others drew pictures. My friends and I found a place and went fishing. To our surprise, we got fishes.

Time passed so quickly and we had to say goodbye. I enjoyed the pleasant exciting trip.

【解析】

1. 考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。根據(jù)第二段中的“some girls...”可知，作者是與一些同學(xué)一起去野營(yíng)，所以此處應(yīng)用classmate的復(fù)數(shù)形式。故將classmate改為classmates。

2. 考查冠詞。distance在此為可數(shù)名詞，表示一段距離，故在long前加a。

3. 考查介詞。start是不及物動(dòng)詞，意為“出發(fā)”，后面不接賓語(yǔ)，不用介詞。故將with去掉。

4. 考查賓語(yǔ)從句。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知， talked about后是一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句，且從句中缺少賓語(yǔ)，所以用what引導(dǎo)該賓語(yǔ)從句；而that引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句時(shí)，在句中不充當(dāng)任何成分，且沒(méi)有意義。故將that改為what。

5. 考查動(dòng)詞。根據(jù)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)last weekend可知，本文講述過(guò)去發(fā)生的事情，該句應(yīng)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，故將takes改為took。

6. 考查代詞。本句主語(yǔ)為some girls，所以物主代詞要用their。故將her改為their。

7. 考查非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。本句中已有謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞listened to，故此處應(yīng)用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式，sing與其邏輯主語(yǔ)birds為主謂關(guān)系，故此處用現(xiàn)在分詞在句中作賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ)，表示鳥(niǎo)正在唱歌。故將sings改為singing。

8. 考查形容詞。此處修飾名詞place，應(yīng)用形容詞，故將quietly改為quiet。

9. 考查不定代詞。fishes此處指魚(yú)，不是魚(yú)肉，是可數(shù)名詞其前用many修飾。故將much改為many。

10. 考查連詞。 pleasant與exciting之間為并列關(guān)系，故將or改為and。