Question

【題目】短文改錯（每小題1分，滿分10分）

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(/)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

As students, all of us will be faced with a problem after passed the college entrance examination. Should we choose a good major and a good university first? Here are some different ideas. Some more prefer to choose a major first so that they can learn they are interested in. On this way they can put their hearts into study and got their favorite jobs in the future. Other believe that the environment is important to one’s develop and that graduates from key universities are more likely to find good jobs. As far as I’m concerning, maybe the choice should be a good university if we can’t obtain all.

Answer 1

【答案】

As students, all of us will be faced with a problem after the college entrance examination. Should we choose a good major a good university first? Here are some different ideas. Some prefer to choose a major first so that they can learn they are interested in. this way they can put their hearts into study and their favorite jobs in the future. believe that the environment is important to one’s and that graduates from key universities are more likely to find good jobs. As far as I’m , maybe the choice should be a good university if we can’t obtain .

【解析】

第一處：passed → passing after為介詞，后面接動名作賓語，故把passed改成passing。

第二處：and → or and用于肯定句，而or用于疑問句和否定句，故把and改成or。

第三處：more去掉 此處舉例說一些人，并沒有比較意義，故把more去掉。

第四處：learn后加what learn后缺賓語，in后也缺賓語，應該用連接代詞what，what引導賓語從句，且在從句中作賓語，故在learn后面加what。

第五處：On → In in this way表示＂以這種方式＂，故把On改成In。

第六處：got → get 形式與can后的＂put＂保持一致，應該用一般現在時，故把got改成get。

第七處：Other → Others 形容詞性物主代詞起形容詞作用，修飾名詞；而名詞性物主代詞起名詞作用，可單獨作主語。故把Other改成Others。

第八處：develop → development 名詞作賓語，develop的名詞形式是development，故把develop改成development。

第九處：concerning → concerned as far as I’m concerned為固定搭配，表示＂就我而言，對我來說＂，故把concerning改成concerned。

第十處：all span>→ both all指代三個或三個以上的人或物，both指代兩個人或物，此處指兩者都……，故把all改成both。