Question

假如你是Jane ， 請以My School Life為題寫一段短文。開頭已給出，要求詞數60左右
提示詞：interesting , classes begin , favorite subject , after school , play basketball , get home , have dinner , watch TV , go to bed
Hi. I am Jane.                                                           
                                                                      
                                                                      
                                                                        

Answer 1

My School Life
I am Jane. My school life is very interesting. My classes begin at 7:00. My favorite subject is English because my English is very kind and friendly. We like him. After school, we usually play basketball with my classmates on the playground. I get home at 17:00. I have dinner with my family at 19:00. When I finish my homework, I watch TV. About21:00, I go to bed. I am very happy every day.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內容表達出來。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當發揮。根據材料內容可知本文主要是一般現在時態，主語是第一人稱，注意時態語時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中正確使用比較形式，注意上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系。
【亮點說明】本文很好地完成了試題規定的任務。覆蓋所有內容要點；應用了較豐富的語法結構和詞匯；用詞準確、句子通順、行文連貫、表達清楚，沒有或基本沒有語言錯誤；書寫工整；字數符合要求。完全達到了預期的寫作目的。