Question

本周是學(xué)校的“愛護(hù)野生動(dòng)物周”。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的材料，為班級(jí)板報(bào)寫一個(gè)關(guān)于獅子的80詞左右的簡(jiǎn)要介紹。
Appearance: big and strong; grey or yellow fur; sharp teeth
Ability: good at hunting
Lifestyle: live on grassland; don’t often move around; meat-eating animals
Danger: people hunt them for fun and change grassland into grazing land (牧場(chǎng))

Answer 1

Lions are big and strong animals. They have grey or yellow fur. Their teeth are very sharp. Lions are good at running and hunting other animals. They mainly live on grassland. They are meat-eating animals. They usually look lazy because they don’t move around often.
Now there aren’t many lions in the wild. People sometimes hunt them for fun. And people keep changing grassland into grazing land. They are losing their living areas.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。要求介紹愛護(hù)野生動(dòng)物---獅子，從獅子的外貌特點(diǎn)到它的特征，以及獅子的生活習(xí)性，重點(diǎn)寫到了獅子面臨的狀況，號(hào)召人們保護(hù)大自然愛護(hù)動(dòng)物。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是第三人稱復(fù)數(shù)，寫作中適當(dāng)使用固定詞組，段落清晰，固定句式的使用會(huì)給文章增色不少。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文內(nèi)容詳略得當(dāng)，有很多精彩的短語(yǔ) 如be good at doing , They mainly live on grassland. And people keep changing grassland into grazing land. They are losing their living areas.點(diǎn)明了主題，號(hào)召人們要愛護(hù)野生動(dòng)物，突出了文章的主題。