Question

為深入開展“解放思想，改進作風(fēng)，奮發(fā)有為，創(chuàng)先爭優(yōu)”主題教育實踐活動，學(xué)校正在開展“創(chuàng)建文明班級”活動，請根據(jù)下表的內(nèi)容，以“A Meaningful Activity”為題，向報社投稿，介紹活動有關(guān)的情況。

主題	告別陋習(xí)，握手文明
目的	根除亂扔、亂吐、亂畫、吸煙、喝酒等現(xiàn)象； 提倡穿校服、講禮貌。
內(nèi)容	? 舉辦圖片展，進行先進班級評比（環(huán)境和行為）等。

要求：1、必須包括提示內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2、詞數(shù)：80 - 100；

3、參考詞匯：文明 civilization; 校園 campus; 告別陋習(xí)，握手文明 “Get rid of Bad Habits and Greet Civilization”

A Meaningful Activity

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Answer 1

【答案】

A Meaningful Activity

??? Our school has now started an activity called “Build Civilized Classes”. The topic is “Get Rid of Bad Habits and Greet Civilization”.

??? We can still see some bad habits in our school. Some students throw rubbish everywhere or spit in public. Some even love smoking and drinking. We require that the students break away from these bad habits. We advise the students to wear their uniform and be polite to others. During the activity, we have held a picture show, a competition between classes for better environment and behavior, and so on.

We all hope that we’ll build each class into a civilized one and our campus into a beautiful place.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。要求介紹為深入開展“解放思想，改進作風(fēng)，奮發(fā)有為，創(chuàng)先爭優(yōu)”主題教育實踐活動，學(xué)校正在開展“創(chuàng)建文明班級”活動，本文所給材料比較詳細，可以按照順內(nèi)容提示。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，主語是第一人稱復(fù)數(shù)，寫作中適當(dāng)使用固定詞組，段落清晰，固定句式的使用會給文章增色不少。

【亮點說明】這篇短文段落分明把材料中內(nèi)容交代得很清: 文中Our school has now started an activity called “Build Civilized Classes”. The topic is “Get Rid of Bad Habits and Greet Civilization”.點明了主題，使用了號召語言We require that the students break away from these bad habits. We advise the students to wear their uniform and be polite to others.這使文章的表達更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。

考點：提綱作文。