Question

根據以下信息，寫一篇不少于100字的文章。

主題：人人為貧困孩子獻愛心

要點：1.許多孩子因為貧困而上不起學。2.沒有足夠的學習用品和衣物。3.都應該有上學的權利.4.盡最大努力去幫助他們。5. ……

參考詞匯：1. too…..to…. 2. school things and clothes 3. have the right to do something 4. try one’s best to do something

In some parts of country, there are many poor children out of school.

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

One possible version：

In some parts of country, there are many poor children out of school.They are too poor to go to school. At the same time, they don’t have enough school things and clothes. In my opinion, each student should have the right to go to school.but there few chances for the poor children. So we should try our best to help them. We can donate our school things and clothes and so on. We hope they will enjoy the same chance of getting knowledge as we do in the school.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹貧困地區孩子的情況以及我們應如何幫助他們。結合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現在時態，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如： there are......；They are......； each student should ......；We can......等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系，注意題目所給的提示要表達完整。

【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了貧困地區孩子的情況，接下來介紹應如何幫助他們，最后希望他們有機會上學。此處用了too ...... to；At the same time；have the right to；try our best to； enjoy the same chance of 等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。

考點：提綱作文。