Question

助人為樂是中華民族的傳統美德。你在生活或學習中是否幫助過別人？是否接受過別人的幫助呢？學校英文廣播站正在開展以“助人為樂”為話題的征文活動。請你結合自己的親身經歷向廣播站投稿，簡述你是如何幫助他人的，并談談你對助人為樂的感受和你今后在這方面的打算。
要求：1、語言通順、連貫，符合邏輯；2、詞數：80~100.
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Answer 1

One possible version:
I enjoy helping others both in school and out of school. In school, I get on well with my classmates and often help them with their lessons. On my way home, I always give my seat to old people or women with babies on the bus. I think helping others can not only make us happy, but also help us get more experience in life. I will go on doing this as much as possible and work hard at my lessons in order to help others better in the future.

試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示，認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態。本文主要是結合自己的在日常生活中的做法和今后的打算，因此一般現在時和一般將來時應用的比較多，所以在寫作時，要注意時態的變化。根據情景的發展，按順序安排好材料。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。
溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。
【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少.如: both in school and out of school；get on well with；I think helping others can not only make us happy, but also help us get more experience in life。學習中注意總結,牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理。
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