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近年來(lái)廣場(chǎng)舞越來(lái)越流行。在公園、小區(qū)甚至一些空地旁常能看到跳舞的人們。上周, Helping Hands Club進(jìn)行了一項(xiàng)問(wèn)卷調(diào)查。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)調(diào)查結(jié)果寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，并談一談對(duì)此事的看法。

贊   成：● 是健康的生活方式, 跳舞能鍛煉身體
● 可以結(jié)交有共同愛(ài)好的朋友
● 人人都有權(quán)利(right)在廣場(chǎng)和空地等公共場(chǎng)所開(kāi)展活動(dòng)
反   對(duì)：● 音樂(lè)聲音太大，影響附近居民的正常生活
● 媒體報(bào)道噪音擾民引起打架傷人
你的看法：● ……
要求：1. 所寫內(nèi)容必須包含以上信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
2. 自擬你對(duì)廣場(chǎng)舞現(xiàn)象的看法，不少于兩點(diǎn)。
3. 文章不少于90詞，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
4. 語(yǔ)句通順，語(yǔ)法正確，條理清楚，字跡工整。
5. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名。
Square dancing is becoming popular and popular in recent years. It is often seen at squares, parks or even open spaces. Last week Helping Hands Club made a survey on square dancing.

Answer 1

One possible version:
Square dancing is becoming popular and popular in recent years. It is often seen at squares, parks or even open spaces. Last week Helping Hands Club made a survey on square dancing.
Some people thought everyone has the right to have activities in public places. It is a good way to take exercise. What’s more, they can make more friends who share the same hobby. But other people disagreed. They complained that noisy music had a bad effect on people’s study and life though square dancing is a kind of healthy lifestyle. Some newspapers said fights happened between citizens and dancers because of this.
In my opinion, it is necessary to take actions to solve the problem. Dancers should turn down the loudspeakers and should not dance till too late at night. If people can understand each other, we will live in a happy and harmony life.

試題分析：本文屬于陳述正反方觀點(diǎn)的議論文作文，談?wù)勱P(guān)于廣場(chǎng)舞的問(wèn)題。要求中只給出了要點(diǎn)，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多，注意將提示的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)清楚，并發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)。結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述，人稱問(wèn)題較為復(fù)雜，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫作中注意表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)時(shí)的常用句式，如賓語(yǔ)從句，條件狀語(yǔ)從句等。注意在表達(dá)不同觀點(diǎn)時(shí)，連詞的使用。內(nèi)容上應(yīng)注意描述的全面性；語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。­
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇范文中出現(xiàn)一些不錯(cuò)的句式和短語(yǔ)，如Square dancing is becoming popular and popular in recent years.近些年來(lái)，廣場(chǎng)舞越來(lái)越多的受到人們的歡迎；make a survey做了一個(gè)調(diào)查；強(qiáng)調(diào)句式， It is adj for sb to do sth，做某事對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)怎么樣；In my opinion, 我的看法是；以及由if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更出彩。