Question

《學(xué)生英文報(bào)》正在舉行“我的美麗家園”征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)為該報(bào)寫一篇征文， 介紹我們的家鄉(xiāng)—多彩貴州。標(biāo)題自擬，文章應(yīng)包括以下要點(diǎn):
1.貴州的地理位置及概況;
2.宜人的氣候和清新的空氣;
3.美麗的風(fēng)景和其他你所了解的內(nèi)容。
要求:1.征文應(yīng)不少于80詞;
2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的個(gè)人信息。
參考詞匯:Huangguoshu Waterfall, Qingyan Town, Jiaxiu Tower

Answer 1

I Love Guizhou
Guizhou province is located in the southwest of China .Guizhou is very beautiful and simple.It has a pleasant climate and clean air.
Guizhou Province is rich in tourist attractions and enjoys many world-famous places of interest, such as Huangguosh Waterfall, Qingyan Town and Jiaxiu Tower and so on. Huangguoshu Waterfall is located in the southwest of Anshun city, 150 kilometers away from Guiyang. It is well known for its rapid and beautiful waterfall, which is clear and cool. It can excite visitors’ imagination.Qingyan town is one of the four ancient towns in Guizhou, which was built 600 years ago, known as one of China 's most attractive towns.
I love my hometown—Guizhou. Welcome to Guizhou.

試題分析：這是一篇提示性作文。要求根據(jù)所給提示寫一篇征文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，并且給出了具體要求，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問題。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇文章語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。