Question

生活中，你經(jīng)歷過(guò)糟糕的一天嗎？那天發(fā)生了什么事情？你是如何度過(guò)的呢？請(qǐng)以“My bad day”為題，寫一篇80詞左右的短文，投稿給《英語(yǔ)園地》的征文“That’s our real life.”
注意：1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、地名等個(gè)人信息。
2. 文章的標(biāo)題及開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
My bad day
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Answer 1

My bad day
We often meet with bad days. I met a bad day on Sep 1. It was the first day of this new term. When I woke up in the morning, it was nearly 7 o’clock. I had a quick wash and rushed to school without breakfast.
When I reached school, I realized I didn’t bring my homework. I felt anxious and had to go back home to fetch it. On the way home I ran as quickly as I could. Suddenly I was knocked down by a bike and my knees were terribly hurt. And I was immediately sent to hospital. I didn’t have any classes that day.
What a bad day I had!

試題分析：那天發(fā)生了什么事情？你是如何度過(guò)的呢？本文要求以“My bad day”為題，寫一篇80詞左右的短文說(shuō)說(shuō)生活中，你經(jīng)歷過(guò)的糟糕的一天，那天發(fā)生了什么事，你如何度過(guò)，投稿給《英語(yǔ)園地》的征文“That’s our real life.根據(jù)要求本文應(yīng)該以第一人稱來(lái)寫作，主要使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，在寫作中，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想像，使用一些連接詞，做到段落分明，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文語(yǔ)句流暢，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確。使用了一些復(fù)合句如When I reached school, I realized I didn’t bring my homework.；On the way home I ran as quickly as I could.等等，這些都為文章增色不少。