Question

18．假如你是李華，和美國朋友Peter學習互助．他寫信給你，提到他最近學習中文取得的進步和遇到的困難．請你回信給他些建議，并談談你英語學習的困惑．信的內容應包括：
1．克服中文困難的建議．2．目前英文學習的困難．3．表達愿望．
注意：1．詞數100左右；2．可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫．3．給出的部分不計入詞數．
Dear Peter，
I?m glad to receive your letter，from which I learn you've made great progress in learning Chinese．（高分句型一）Not only can you speak more Chinese than before，but you've been able to catch some TV programs in Chinese．（高分句型二）
And I'm informed that you have some difficulty reading Chinese．Personally，you should learn and memorize more Chinese characters．Besides，you should choose some simpler articles．
As for my English，I'm faced with a new problem．From Book 6，the new words and texts in each module double those in the previous textbooks．Ihope you can give me some advice on how to deal with it，and that your reading will improve greatly soon．（高分句型三）
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據提示信息假如你是李華，和美國朋友Peter學習互助．他寫信給你，提到他最近學習中文取得的進步和遇到的困難．請你回信給他些建議，并談談你英語學習的困惑，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：克服中文困難的建議．目前英文學習的困難．表達愿望．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態、語態．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：make great progress取得巨大進步；Not only，but （also）不僅，而且；Personally就…個人而言；Besides另外；As for至于；be faced with 面對；deal with 應對，處理；
I'm glad to receive your letter，from which I learn you've made great progress in learning Chinese．（高分句型一）
Not only can you speak more Chinese than before，but you've been able to catch some TV programs in Chinese．（高分句型二）
I hope you can give me some advice on how to deal with it，and that your reading will improve greatly soon．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Peter，
       I'm glad to receive your letter，from which I learn you've made great progress in learning Chinese．（高分句型一）Not only can you speak more Chinese than before，but you've been able to catch some TV programs in Chinese．（高分句型二）
       And I'm informed that you have some difficulty reading Chinese．Personally，you should learn and memorize more Chinese characters．Besides，you should choose some simpler articles．
       As for my English，I'm faced with a new problem．From Book 6，the new words and texts in each module double those in the previous textbooks．I hope you can give me some advice on how to deal with it，and that your reading will improve greatly soon．（高分句型三）（106words）
       Best wishes．
                                                                                                      Yours，
                                                                                                      Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．