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書面表達(dá)  (滿分25分)
假如你是李華,最近，你班同學(xué)就中學(xué)生是否可以帶手機(jī)上學(xué)進(jìn)行了討論。請你根據(jù)下列信息，給校長寫一封信，客觀地介紹你班討論的情況

70%的學(xué)生認(rèn)為	30%的學(xué)生認(rèn)為
1. 沒有必要帶手機(jī)。 2．帶手機(jī)會分散學(xué)習(xí)精力，上課開機(jī)影響極壞。 3. 學(xué)生用手機(jī)會增加家長經(jīng)濟(jì)負(fù)擔(dān)。	1．學(xué)生可以帶手機(jī)上學(xué)，但上課要關(guān)機(jī)。 2．學(xué)生帶手機(jī)可以方便聯(lián)系。 3．信息時代的交流工具，不應(yīng)禁止

1.詞數(shù):100字左右 
2.經(jīng)濟(jì)負(fù)擔(dān)economic burdens.
3.信的開頭已經(jīng)為你寫好
Dear principle,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether a mobile phone should be brought to school.

Answer 1

One  possible version:
Dear principle,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether a mobile phone should be brought to school.
To tell you the truth, the students in our class have different opinions.About 70% of the students think that we shouldn’t bring  mobile phones to school. Because with them we may not fix our attention to the lessons. If the phone is not turned off by chance and the ringing will destroy the class. Furthermore, using mobile phones will add to our parents’ economic burdens. However,about 30% of the students think we can bring phones to school on condition that we turned off them in class. With a mobile phone it is convenient for us to keep in touch with our parents and friends.Besides,the mobile phone is a tool of information times. It may not be right to ban students from carrying  mobile phones.
Yours sincerely,  
Li Hua    

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