Question

下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（∧），并在其下面寫上該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。

注意： 1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

       2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從11處起) 不計分。

As is known to all that our students of today have to fix our attention on our lessons, so we know few of society. A holiday is the best time and the best chance to make up for that. Take a part-time job is a good form of social practice. That we have learned in books and in class can’t have same important effect on us as what we have learned through personal practice. In social practice, we can surely make a progress in both knowledge or practical ability. Beside, when we take a part-time job, we may got paid more or less to help our family. Thus, I will say a senior school student should take a part-time job in their holidays, if possible. 

Answer 1

It is known to all that we students of today have to fix our attention on our lessons, so we know little of society. A holiday is the best time and the best chance to make up for that. Taking a part-time job is a good form of social practice. What we have learned in books and in class can’t have the same important effect on us as what we have learned through personal practice. In social practice, we can surely make 去掉a  progress in both knowledge and practical ability. Besides, when we take a part-time job, we may get paid more or less to help our family. Thus, I will say a senior school student should take a part-time job in their holidays, if possible.

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