Question

7．假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，介紹你上周五放學(xué)回家后，第一次為家人做飯的過(guò)程，并以"My First Cooking"為題，給校刊"英語(yǔ)角"寫一篇英文稿件．
注意：詞數(shù)不少于60．
提示詞：家常菜 homely dishes

Answer 1

分析 本文是圖畫類作文，以"My First Cooking"為題，要求根據(jù)四幅圖的先后順序及所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)用英文寫一篇短文，介紹上周五放學(xué)回家后，第一次為家人做飯的過(guò)程，既是情景作文又是一種開放性作文．
在寫作時(shí)，以第一和第三人稱為主．時(shí)態(tài)以一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主．根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，抓住細(xì)節(jié)按順序安排好材料．
重要短語(yǔ)：think about（考慮），stop doing （停止做某事），decide to do（決定做某事），instead of （代替，而不是），on the internet（在網(wǎng)絡(luò)上），do homely dishes（做家常菜），manage to do sth（成功地做某事），try to do sth（努力做某事），can't wait to do（迫不及待地做某事），would like to do（想要做某事），prepare sth for sb（為某人準(zhǔn)備某物）．
【高分句型一】
1．Thinking about the supper，I stopped doing my homework and decided to make a meal for my family instead of just waiting．
此處是由現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)"Thinking about the supper"作伴隨狀語(yǔ)，主句為"I stopped doing my homework and decided to make a meal for my family instead of just waiting"，主句的主語(yǔ)"I"與所給動(dòng)詞"think about"構(gòu)成邏輯上的主動(dòng)關(guān)系．
【高分句型二】
2．①When my parents came back home，they couldn't believe their eyes to see the dishes ②made by me．
①此處是由連詞"when"引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，主句為they couldn't believe their eyes to see the dishes made by me"．
②此處是由過(guò)去分詞短語(yǔ)"made by me"作名詞"the dishes"的后置定語(yǔ)，可以理解為定語(yǔ)從句"the dishes which were made by me"．
【高分句型三】
3．While my Mum was taking pictures，my Dad couldn't wait to have a taste and gave me the thumbs up．
    此處是由連詞"while"引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，意為"當(dāng)…時(shí)候"，主句為"my Dad couldn't wait to have a taste and gave me the thumbs up"．

解答 My First Cooking
Last Friday，the evening fell，but my parents didn't come back home yet．Thinking about the supper，I stopped doing my homework and decided to make a meal for my family instead of just waiting．【高分句型一】（Picture 1 天色已晚決定自己動(dòng)手做飯）
It was my first cooking．I surfed on the internet with my cell phone to get the detailed information on how to do homely dishes．（Picture 2 上網(wǎng)收索做家常的具體做法）With the step-by-step directions，I managed to make my first dish． Then I tried to cook another．（Picture 3 按照步驟成功做好了第一道菜準(zhǔn)備再做其它菜）When my parents came back home，they couldn't believe their eyes to see the dishes made by me．【高分句型二】While my Mum was taking pictures，my Dad couldn't wait to have a taste and gave me the thumbs up．【高分句型三】（Picture 4 父母回來(lái)品嘗并夸贊）
I would like to prepare more meals for my family!

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