Question

以A Ten-Minute Break 為題，寫一篇詞數為100左右的短文。短文的內容必須包括以下幾點：

1、課間十分鐘的休息是必要的；2、要注意休息的方式，別讓自己過于興奮；

3、自己通常是怎樣利用這十分鐘的。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

                            A Ten-Minute Break 

As students, we have classes from early morning till late afternoon. Therefore, to take a ten-minute break between classes is definitely important, even necessary. Otherwise, we may feel both physically and mentally tired.

     During the ten-minute break we do something to get rid of tiredness. What we need is to have a real rest, instead of getting more tired. So don’t do anything that will make you too excited.  

My ten-minute break is always pleasing. I usually do some simple exercise. Sometimes I have a free chat with my classmates or just take a walk during the break. When the new class begins, I feel fresh again.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是篇簡短的論說文，內容提示較詳細，學生容易把握寫作要求和寫作目的。考生在寫作之前必修認真審題，根據提示寫作分為三部分內容，尤其要具體寫出自己的課間十分鐘是怎么度過的。另外，要注意文章的時態，要用一般現在時。用第一人稱有單數也要用復數。再有就是不能根據材料逐字逐句的翻譯應該注意句子的銜接，以提高作文的檔次。

【亮點說明】文章要點齊全，表達思路明確，知識點運用恰當到位，文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如definitely important ，feel both physically and mentally tired ，get rid of，instead of等， 還運用了名詞性從句What we need is to have a real rest，定語從句So don’t do anything that will make you too excited.及狀語從句When the new class begins, I feel fresh again.等。并注意了句子的銜接如：therefore，otherwise等。

考點：簡短的論說文