Question

基礎寫作(滿分15分)

2008年元月18日下午3點你校在學校禮堂舉行了成人宣誓儀式。請以日記的方式記錄儀式過程并談談自己的感想.

      

主       題	成長，責任
參 加 人 員	高三師生，全體學生家長
儀 式 程 序	1. 學生宣誓 2. 學生代表發(fā)言 （表達謝意，暢談理想） 3. 教師和家長代表發(fā)言 （表示祝賀，寄予希望） 4. 各班學生表演節(jié)目

參考詞匯:  成人儀式a grown-up ceremony  宣誓 make an oath

【寫作內容】

1. 舉行儀式的時間、地點；

2. 表格中的內容;

3. 你自己的感想。

【寫作要求】

1. 必須扣緊題目的要求，用5個規(guī)范的英語句子組織成連貫的文章

2. 組織成連貫的短文，開頭已經寫好，不計入總句子數

【評分標準】

1.句子結構的準確性和復雜度

2. 短文內容的完整性和連貫性

        January 18th  Friday                                     Fine

Answer 1

January 18th  Friday                                     Fine

At 3:00 this afternoon, the teachers and students in Senior Three as well as our parents attended the grown-up ceremony held in the school hall, whose theme is “Growth and Responsibility”. First, we made an oath, and then a student, representing all of us, made a speech, showing our thanks to not only our parents but also our teachers and talking about our great ideals. After that, some teachers and parents offered us their congratulations and expressed their expectations for our future. Last, we watched wonderful performances put on by students from different classes. The ceremony was over, but it has made me well aware that I have grown up and I am supposed to shoulder the responsibility for our society.

解析:

日記要求時態(tài)多用過去式，寫全要點：1. 舉行儀式的時間、地點；2. 表格中的內容; 3. 你自己的感想；注意過渡，重點放在自己的感想上。