Question

你接受了一項(xiàng)寫作任務(wù)，要求英語(yǔ)校報(bào)寫一篇“校史展覽館”的介紹。

[寫作內(nèi)容]

請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下信息，介紹你校“校史展覽館”的基本情況。

[寫作要求]

只能用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容

[評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]

句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Located on the 1st floor of the library, the School Exhibition Hall, which covers an area of about 300 square meters, has a history of more than forty years. With varieties of forms like words, pictures, real objects, videos and so on, it gives us a bird view of the development of our school since 1942. Here we can find brief introductions to headmasters of all terms, and the prizes got by outstanding students and teachers. It has also witnessed the advanced teaching concepts and proud achievements. The Hall is a great place for us to see the long history and rich culture of our school，which encourages us to study harder, be grateful to our school and serve our motherland.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇說(shuō)明文的寫作。要求介紹學(xué)校“校史展覽館”的基本情況。說(shuō)明文的時(shí)態(tài)往往使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。文章的提綱已列出，但各項(xiàng)具體內(nèi)容需自己補(bǔ)充，因此，本文是半開(kāi)放性書(shū)面表達(dá)。要求只能用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容，故要求有綜合組織運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力。

考點(diǎn)：說(shuō)明文。

點(diǎn)評(píng)：關(guān)于學(xué)校展覽館基本情況的說(shuō)明文，一般來(lái)說(shuō)首先是介紹學(xué)校的地理位置，占地面積，歷史。然后介紹學(xué)校的發(fā)展情況，如師資力量，教學(xué)理念，發(fā)展成就等，最后介紹布展目的。