Question

短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

請修改下面的短文。短文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及單詞的增加，刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出修改后的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1，每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

      2，只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不記分。

Many times when I was at a bad mood I shouted at the people around me. I

scream, shouted and ran as fast as I could relieve my pressure. So it was useless,

since I still had to return to the problem. This term I begin to change. I have realized however greater the difficulty is, I have to face with it. It’s no use screaming and

shouting at others. Beside, there are teachers and friends around me who are ready to

helping me. As long as I try my best, I can make a progress in any aspect. Now I feel

every day is a pleasant day and the sun is always shining bright on my face.

Answer 1

Many times when I was at a bad mood I shouted at the people around me.

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scream, shouted and ran as fast as I could∧ relieve my pressure. So it was useless,

screamed                          to                 But

since I still had to return to the problem. This term I begin to change. I have realized

however greater the difficulty is, I have to face with it. It’s no use screaming and  

       great

shouting at others. Beside, there are teachers and friends around me who are ready to

               Besides

helping me. As long as I try my best, I can make a progress in any aspect. Now I feel

help

every day is a pleasant day and the sun is always shining bright on my face.

                                              brightly

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