Question

假如你是李明，你的班里來了一位英國交換生Paul。他在和你的交談中表示在中國學(xué)習(xí)壓力很大。請你給他寫封信，給他提一些建議。主要包括以下內(nèi)容：

1．請求老師和同學(xué)的幫助。

2．不要總想著考試成績，要多想自己的進步。

3．多進行體育運動。

4．……。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)：120字左右；

2. 可適當(dāng)加入細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 信的開頭已為你寫好（不計入總詞數(shù)）。

Dear Paul,

I quite sympathize with you and understand the great trouble you are suffering from.  ______________________________________________________________________________

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Yours sincerely                                                                              Li Ming

 

Answer 1

【答案】

不唯一

Dear Paul,

I quite sympathize with you and understand the great trouble you are suffering from.I suggest you communicate your trouble to your teachers and classmates so as to get help from them.You are not supposed to think about your exams all the time,which only makes you more stressed out.Instead,you should think about the progress you have made in your study,which will surely increase your own confidence.In addition,I advise you to do more exercise in your spare time to relieve your stress,because sports will also help you sleep better at night.As for me,I would like to listen to classic music if I have time.

I hope you will get out of your trouble sooner and live happily.

Yours sincerely                                                                               Li Ming

【解析】

試題分析：先讀提示，要點與格式要弄清；時態(tài)語態(tài)要當(dāng)心，前后呼應(yīng)要一致，結(jié)構(gòu)搭配莫違背；文章寫好細檢查，點滴小錯別忽視。學(xué)生在明確目的和掌握要領(lǐng)后，要嚴(yán)格按照規(guī)定的時間去完成作文訓(xùn)練任務(wù)。最后要檢查（1）要點是否齊全，有無遺漏。（2）內(nèi)容是否連貫，有無缺詞。（3）語法是否正確，人稱、時態(tài)、語態(tài)、名詞單復(fù)數(shù)等有無錯誤。（4）用詞是否得當(dāng)，有無習(xí)語及固定搭配等方面的錯誤。

考點：提綱作文。

點評：好作文應(yīng)該是緊扣文章主題，遵循書信格式，選用恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z言合理組織文章結(jié)構(gòu)，內(nèi)容統(tǒng)一、連貫，語法、拼寫、標(biāo)點正確，用詞恰當(dāng)。為了避免太多單詞拼寫錯誤，語法錯誤，不要為了追求詞語的華麗而堆積一些自己也沒把握的單詞，不要刻意追求長句而寫一些自己不知對錯的有多個從句組成的長句。考試時最好選擇自己最有把握的詞匯，短語，句式。