Question

假設你是李華，作為交流學生去了美國新奧爾良市（New Orleans）學習生活了一年。在此期間，你住在Brown夫婦家中，他們為你提供了吃、住、行及旅游方面的幫助。請你給他們寫一封感謝信，主要內容如下：

 ◆表示感謝

 ◆表達感受

 ◆歡迎來訪

 ◆保持聯系

 注意：

 1．詞數100左右。

 2．信的開頭和結尾已為你寫好。

 3．可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

April 10

Dear Mr．and Mrs．Brown,

 I'm writing to you from my home in China．

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Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version:

Dear Mr．and Mrs．Brown,

   I'm writing to you from my home in China．I returned home safe and sound．When thinking of the wonderful days I spent in New Orleans, I just can't help thinking of both of you．It was so kind of you to have provided everything to make my stay there such a happy experience．I’ve learned so much, not only English but also culture．And I really enjoyed a great deal, the fun and laughter we shared with each other．Thank you very much．I'll always remember this trip as well as your kindness．

   Welcome to China when it’s convenient for you．I’ll be very glad to show you around．And you’ll surely have a pleasant visit here．

   I’ll keep in touch and write to you later．Please take care!

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本書面表達是要求學生寫一封書信，材料非常簡單，學生很容易把握寫作要求和寫作目的。考生在寫作之前必修認真審題，首先要注意文章的時態，對住在Brown夫婦家中，提供了吃、住、行及旅游方面的幫助，用一般過去時態。注意本文必須用第一人稱。再有就是不能根據材料逐字逐句的翻譯應該注意句子的銜接，以提高作文的檔次。

【亮點說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如think of，can’t help doing，provide sth. to sb.，share with, it’s convenient to sb.，還運用句型It was kind of sb. to do sth.等等。并注意了句子的銜接如：when, not only … but also …, 等等。

考點：書信類作文