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第二節 讀寫任務(共l小題，滿分25分)
閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。
Friendship with oneself is all important, because without it one cannot be friends with anyone else in the world.
We often focus on building relationships with others that we forget the essential first step: being friends of ourselves. That is the crucial first step if we are to have good relationships with others. How can we have good relationships with others if we don’t even have good relationship with ourselves?
Here are some tips:
1. Forgive yourself
You may have made those mistakes in the past, but is there anything you can do about them? I don’t think so, except learning from them. It’s true that you are not perfect, but neither is everybody else. It’s normal to make mistakes, so do yourself a favor by giving yourself forgiveness.
2. Focus on your strengths
Instead of focusing on your weaknesses, focus on your strengths. You always have some strengths which give you a unique combination nobody else have. Recognize your strengths and build your life around them.
3. Stop comparing yourself with others
You are unique. You can never be like other people, and neither can other people be like you. The way you measure your success is not determined by other people and what they achieve. Instead, it is determined by your own life purpose. You have everything you need to achieve your life purpose, so it’s useless to compare yourself with others.
[寫作內容]
假設你的同學總覺得自己學習不如別人，因而產生自卑心理，請你寫根據上面所提供的材料寫一篇短文,用E-mail 發給他(她)：
1．以約30個詞概括文章大意，說明首先要對善待自己的觀點；
2．以約120個詞表達你對他(她)的建議和希望，并包括如下要點：
(1) 分析他(她) 產生自卑心理的原因；
(2) 找出他(她)的優勢；
(3) 提出合理建議。
[寫作要求]            1．作文中可使用自己的親身經歷或虛構的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；       2．文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱；  3．文章開頭和結尾已寫好。
[評分標準]
概括準確，語言規范，內容合適，篇章連貫。
Dear Li Ping,
I’m glad that you trust me so much and tell me your true feeling, now I’ve read an article which says that                                                 
_____________________________________________________________________With the best wishes!
Yours truly，
Wang Yan

Answer 1

[One possible version]
Dear Li Ping,
I’m glad that you trust me so much and tell me your true feeling, now I’ve read an article which says that it is important to be friendly to yourself first and then to others, and gives a few tips, such as forgiving yourself, realizing your virtues and not comparing with others.
As is known to all, no one is perfect，and everyone has their own strengths and weaknesses, so if you fall behind others in some aspect, it’s natural and there’s nothing so serious as for you to feel frustrated. I know you’re  worried about your study because you’ve not got as good results as some of your classmates in the exams, but that’s not the most important, so long as you try your best, I’m sure you’ll make progress. Besides, You have your own virtues which some others don’t have, for example, you play basketball better than many other students in our school, and you also play the guitar well. How we envy you!
So never feel discouraged if you fall behind others in your study, and be sure you are good at many aspects.
With the best wishes!
Yours truly,
Wang Yan

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