Question

6．假如你是李華，最近你從報紙上看到一家外企公司招聘秘書的廣告，請你根據下列要點提示給經理寫一封應聘信．
1）今年20歲，即將畢業于職業院校．主修經濟管理．
2）學習英語超過八年了，熟悉電腦操作；在過去曾任學生報的編輯，有寫作和編輯經驗；在校成績優秀．
3）性格外向，交際能力強．
要求：1）內容要連貫、完整．
2）敘述必須用第一人稱．
3）字數：100左右．
參考詞匯：職業院校vocational school；主修 major in  經驗experience  操作operate
經濟管理 business management
Dear Sir or Madam，
I am writing in response to your advertisement for the position as a secretary in the newspaper．My name is Li Hua and I am twenty years old and I'm going to graduate from a vocational school．（高分句型一）I major in business management．Besides，I've learned English for more than eight years and I am familiar with computer operation．In the last three years，I've been one of the editors of our student newspaper，which makes me experienced in writing and editing．（高分句型二）I do well in my study and my scores are outstanding in my class．I am outing and good at communicating with others．I am sure that I will be qualified for secretary．
I would appreciate it if you could give me the chance to work in your company．（高分句型三）I'm looking forward to your reply．

Yours
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據提示信息假如你是李華，最近你從報紙上看到一家外企公司招聘秘書的廣告，請你根據下列要點提示給經理寫一封應聘信，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：假如你是李華，最近你從報紙上看到一家外企公司招聘秘書的廣告，請你根據下列要點提示給經理寫一封應聘信．1）今年20歲，即將畢業于職業院校．主修經濟管理．2）學習英語超過八年了，熟悉電腦操作；在過去曾任學生報的編輯，有寫作和編輯經驗；在校成績優秀．3）性格外向，交際能力強．
2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態、語態．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：in response to 作為…的回應；graduate from從…畢業；Besides另外；be familiar with 對…熟悉；do well in 在…方面做得好；look forward to 盼望；
My name is Li Hua and I am twenty years old and I'm going to graduate from a vocational school．（高分句型一）
In the last three years，I've been one of the editors of our student newspaper，which makes me experienced in writing and editing．（高分句型二）
I would appreciate it if you could give me the chance to work in your company．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
       I am writing in response to your advertisement for the position as a secretary in the newspaper．
       My name is Li Hua and I am twenty years old and I'm going to graduate from a vocational school．（高分句型一）I major in business management．Besides，I've learned English for more than eight years and I am familiar with computer operation．In the last three years，I've been one of the editors of our student newspaper，which makes me experienced in writing and editing．（高分句型二）I do well in my study and my scores are outstanding in my class．I am outing and good at communicating with others．I am sure that I will be qualified for secretary．
        I would appreciate it if you could give me the chance to work in your company．（高分句型三）I'm looking forward to your reply．
                                                                                                      Yours，
                                                                                                     Li  Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．