Question

閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語作文。

This is a story that happened in a school campus. One day, after school was over, Peter was taking a walk in the school campus, singing very happily. When he passed by a water tap(水龍頭), he found that water was still running.Someone forgot to turn it off although it was the easiest thing for him to turn it off, and he should have done so，he seemed not to have noticed it and went on walking as if nothing was happening there.   

Just then, Mary was passing by and noticed that. Who left the water running after using it? she thought to herself. She rushed to the tap and turned it off as quickly as possible.When　Mary was doing that, Peter was right there, standing beside her with a cold look. Mary turned to him and scolded him for not having turned off the tap. “It is none of my business！”Peter said coldly, Besides, it was not I who had turned it on.”Hearing this, Mary was very disappointed and she was at a great loss.

【寫作內(nèi)容】

1．以約30個詞概括短文要點(diǎn)；

2.然后從"節(jié)約資源，保護(hù)環(huán)境，從身邊小事做起”這一角度，寫一篇120詞左右的英語作文。內(nèi)容包括：    

(1)簡要評述Mary或Peter的行為并說明你的理由；    

(2)敘述你或你身邊所發(fā)生的類似的故事；    

(3)談?wù)勀愕母惺芘c啟發(fā)。

【寫作要求】

1.作文中，可以使用自己親身的經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

3.標(biāo)題為：Try to Do the Small Things around You

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Possible version: 

Try to Do the Small Things around You   

Peter found water running out of a tap but turned a blind eye to it，while Mary, a girl of responsibilities, took a different attitude and rushed to turn it off.  

(簡要評述Mary或Peter的行為并說明你的理由) As for me, Mary is really great, because she is ready to do something that seems very small. Maybe her behavior is very common in someone’s eyes, but it is playing and will continue to play an important part in our daily life.   

(敘述你或你身邊所發(fā)生的類似的故事)We could see such kinds of small things around us every day. For example, when we leave the classroom, we just ignore the lights and computers and leave them on; when we have dinners, we often use the one time used chopsticks and plastic bags; when we finish some drinks and food, we throw the leftover very causally. Water wasting is often noticed here and there, too. For example, when some students take a bath, wash their hands, bowls or clothes, the running water doesn’t stop until everything ends. What’s worse, some students seldom turn off the tap/water, leaving it dropping all the way, even if everything is finished.    Are you familiar with those occasions? Are you one of those people that we have mentioned above? Have you ever thought about those bad effects on our environment?   (談?wù)勀愕母惺芘c啟)發(fā)As we all know, actions speak louder than words. We should take action to do the small things around us to protect our environment. Remember: every little contribution counts.  

【解析】

試題分析：本文討論的話題"節(jié)約資源，保護(hù)環(huán)境，從身邊小事做起”是考生很熟悉的熱門話題，有很強(qiáng)的可寫性�？梢院唵蚊枋鲎约荷磉叞l(fā)生的小事情來體現(xiàn)文章的主題。自己的個人感受可以從環(huán)境的重要性以及人人為之做出貢獻(xiàn)著手。

考點(diǎn)：考查半開放性作文

點(diǎn)評：半開放性作文給出了一個話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點(diǎn)組織成一個完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個人觀點(diǎn)的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。