Question

閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。

No doubt the planet is warming. Over the last century, the temperature has risen by around one degree Fahrenheit. It’s reported that the global temperatures will rise  by 3-10 degrees Fahrenheit—enough to have the polar caps almost melted. If the ice caps melt, buildings, homes and even lives will be under water.

While we know about global warming,  what can we do to save the planet? The answer is simpler than supposed. You don’t have to go miles away to protest, or spend much money. Here are several simple steps to begin with.

Firstly, plant a tree.Trees , when fully grown, will keep the plante cooler.

Secondly, reduce pollution. Sometimes as simple as walking instead of taking the car will reduce pollution. Besides stop pollution, you are giving yourself exercise. So whenever you get into your car, just ask yourself, “do I have to make this journey by vehicle?”

When you get a little cold in winter, put a jumper on and don’t adjust the heating. The extra heat produced by homes also affect the planet.

Finally, reduce, reuse and recycle. Only buy what you need and reuse whatever you can, like containers and paper, and recycle what you cannot reuse.

If everyone stuck to these rules, we would be doing a great thing by protecting the Earth. It is our next generation that will feel the effects.

[寫作內(nèi)容]

1. 以約30個詞概括這段短文的內(nèi)容 ;

2. 然后以約120個詞就“阻止全球變暖從我做起”進(jìn)行議論，內(nèi)容包括：

（1）全球變暖危及人類生存；

（2）阻止全球變暖要從小事做起；

（3）你的做法。

[寫作要求]

1. 在作文中可以使用自己親身的經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

2. 標(biāo)題自定。

[評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]

概括準(zhǔn)確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

不唯一

According to the passage, if the global temperatures rise by 3-10 degrees Fahrenheit, it is possible for everything to be under water. To save the earth, some simple measures are mentioned for us to take.

Now we have to recognize global warming as a real threat to mankind. We need to hold back global warming and prepare for its outcome. Otherwise, the collapse of the human civilization is almost certain, and the human race is at risk of becoming extinct.

Everyone should start out small, adopting a responsible lifestyle, which can bring an important help to the protection of the earth. It’s the only reasonable way to save the planet., before it is too late.

So something must be done to benefit our environment I’ll use a clothesline instead of a dryer to save energy when drying my clothes. Fresh foods are my favour instead of frozen ones, because frozen foods consume ten times more energy to produce.

In a word, we should do our best to hold back global warming and protect the environment

【解析】

試題分析：概括全文。利用文章所給的語言材料, 分析歸納句組間的邏輯關(guān)系, 并用自己的話來寫作；概括要全面, 刪去細(xì)節(jié), 保留主要事實(信息)；語言要簡練, 概括后的字?jǐn)?shù)必須滿足題目要求(30個字左右)。 概括后的文章意思要通順, 行文要連貫。要求的是將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)意思的能力。

考點：提綱作文。

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