Question

第二節(jié)：書面表達(dá)（滿分30分）
在緊張的高三備考階段，英語王老師為了提高復(fù)習(xí)效率，廣泛征求學(xué)生意見，并借此訓(xùn)練學(xué)生的書面表達(dá)能力。假如你叫張華，請根據(jù)以下提示，給老師寫封信，表達(dá)你的需求和建議。
● 為夯實(shí)基礎(chǔ)，適當(dāng)放慢進(jìn)度，留出思考和消化的時間；
● 請反復(fù)訓(xùn)練易錯的知識點(diǎn)，提供典型試題；
● 指導(dǎo)寫作方面的方法；
● 精選回家作業(yè)，減少作業(yè)量；
● …… （個人補(bǔ)充）
注意：
1．短文必須包括以上要點(diǎn)以及個人的補(bǔ)充要求或建議，不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫。
2．詞數(shù)：120個左右。開頭已給出，不計詞數(shù)。
Dear Mr．Wang,
Thank you for providing us with an opportunity to share our views．
In the course of the general revision,
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Yours
Li Hua

Answer 1

（One possible version）
Dear Mr．Wang,
Thank you for providing us with an opportunity to share our views．
In the course of the general revision, what we need is solid foundation．So please slow down and make sure we have really mastered what we learn．Besides, we need a little more time to think for ourselves and to digest．As for those confusing points where we often make mistakes, would you please provide us with typical exercises to practice more? Meanwhile, we need your guidance on writing, for example, how to think in English and write in idiomatic English．I still have another request: select exercises of high quality and assign us less homework．
By the way, as the examination is drawing near, we often feel frustrated, which has a very bad effect on our study．We would appreciate it if you would give us some encouragement from time to time．
Yours
Li Hua

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