Question

書面表達(滿分25分)
今天，你收到了好友小玲的一封信，信中她說最近想買一部手機，為此她征求你的意見，根據以下提示，請你寫一封建議她不要買手機的回信。字數：120左右，信的開頭已給出，不講入字數。
提示：
1、發短信會占據太多的學習時間;
2、校內不許用手機，因為會打擾別人;
3、還經常會收到一些欺騙性的不良短信;
4、因手機費用而增加父母的負擔。

Answer 1

Dear Xiao Ling,
I’m very glad to receive your letter today. How are you getting along with your study?
I am pleased that you want my advice on whether you should buy a mobile phone or not. If you do not mind, I suggest that you should not buy one. Why? First, it takes up too much time to send or receive short messages. Therefore the time that you should spend on studies becomes shorter. Second, it is forbidden to use mobile phones at school because sometimes you have to respond the call in class. Otherwise, your behavior can disturb others. Third, you may be disturbed by some false short messages. Furthermore, as a student, you have to ask parents for the phone expense. That is, they will burden more to support you than before.
You must, of course, use your own judgment, but I would suggest this.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Lei.

解析這題是要點作文，寫作時，要將要點寫全，還不能逐字逐句翻譯，切記不能用漢語的表達方式，要用英語常用短語和句型，如范文里的 I am pleased that you want my advice on whether you should buy a mobile phone or not.這句話中出現了兩個賓語從句，the time that you should spend on studies becomes shorter.這是定語從句，it is forbidden to use mobile phones at school because sometimes you have to respond the call in class.這是it做形式主語的用法，當然，寫作時不能忽略文章的連貫問題，可以用First 、Second、Third,連接，還要根據文章的句子間的邏輯關系選用適當的副詞，如：Therefore 、Otherwise等。