Question

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

    增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

    刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

    修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

    注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

          2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

    My hometown is a small village. Small as it is, but it’s very beautiful.

　 There are a number of hill around my hometown and they are very beautiful. In spring, we fly kites are made by themselves on the top of the hills. The kites fly very highly. In summer, the trees and grass are green and the flowers are bright on the hills. Beside, the wild apples are nice to eating. In autumn, corns at the foot of the hills were ripe. In winter, when it snows, something is covered with snow. We play with snow and make snowmen.

    In my hometown there are blue sky, fresh air, sweet water and kind people. I love my hometown!

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 去掉but

 hill → hills

 kites后加that / which或去掉are

 themselves → ourselves

 highly → high

 Beside → Besides

 eating → eat

 were → are

 something → everything

 are → is

【解析】

試題分析：

 去掉but上下文自己沒有轉折關系，是順接的關系，而且上文的small as it is=Though it is small

 hill → hills   A number of許多，后面要接復數形式。

 kites后加that / which或去掉are用定語從句修飾先行詞。

 themselves → ourselves 上文出現的是we，故使用ourselves

 highly → high    high可以表示抽象意義的高。

 Beside → Besides   Besides 副詞:而且

 eating → eat  用不定式做補足語

 were → are  本文使用一般現在時。

 something → everything  所有的物體都覆蓋著雪。

 are → is  本句是倒裝句，主語是后面的blue sky，這是不可數名詞，故使用單數形式。

考點：考查短文糾錯

點評：考查考生在上下文中運用語法的能力以及細節考查，特別關注單復數和時態。