Question

假如你叫李華,你校的外教Smith夫婦刊登了一則廣告在你校網頁上,他們要在假期招聘一名臨時保姆(babysitter),請你根據下面的提示給他們寫一封電子郵件應聘。 注意:詞數100左右。

★你有照顧孩子的經驗；

★擅長烹飪,符合對方的要求。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mr. and Mrs. Smith,

I am Li Hua. I know from the advertisement on the web that you are looking for a babysitter. I’m really interested in the job and want to apply for it. I’m confident that I’m qualified to do it. On the one hand, I’m looking for a part-time job for the summer vacation; on the other hand, I’m experienced in taking care of kids. I used to help my aunt look after my younger brother.

I got the love of teaching children from my mother who is a kindergarten teacher. Besides, I learned to cook when I was still in primary school and now I’m really a good cook. In fact, the whole family enjoys the food I make.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,   

lihua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文，需要寫的內容已經給出，但是寫作時不要僅僅對要點進行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內容，使文章看起來更充實，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文，一定要談談自己的看法。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，不能出現文章脫節問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時注意要求的字數，不要太多也不要太少。

考點：提綱作文

點評：本文屬于提綱作文，動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。