Question

短文改錯（滿分10分）

   下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在下面加上該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

            2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

例如： It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. Luckily                                       the I was completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8 p.m. am in Friday evening. on

Today I’d like to tell you anything about riding a bike in London. If you visit London, you’ll

see many buses, cars or bikes. It’s very cheap and quick to use bike. If you take a bus, I often have to wait for an hour or so. Besides, the buses move very slowly. The underground is quickly but expensive and often crowded. I used to travel to work by bus. I was often late, and tiring. Then a friend suggested we went to work by bike. I followed him. Although we went slowly, but we always arrived on time. Taking a bus takes 50 minutes, while ride a bike only half an hour. Now I love riding to work and I feel more better.

Answer 1

Today I’d like to tell you anything about riding a bike in London. If you visit London,

                    something

you’ll see many buses, cars or bikes. It’s very cheap and quick to use∧ bike. If you take a bus,

                     and                                a/bikes

I often have to wait for an hour or so. Besides, the buses move very slowly. The

you

underground is quickly but expensive and often crowded. I used to travel to work by bus. I was

             quick

often late, and tiring. Then a friend suggested we went to work by bike. I followed him.

            tired                        go

Although we went slowly, but we always arrived on time. Taking a bus takes 50 minutes, while

ride a bike only half an hour. Now I love riding to work and I feel more better.

riding                                                much/去掉

解析:

第一行：測試不定代詞。肯定句中應該用something；anything常用語否定句或疑問句中。

第二行：測試連詞和名詞。肯定句中連接詞應該用and；or 通常用于否定句中。bike屬于可數名詞需要修飾語，要么使用復數表示類別。

第三行：測試代詞一致性。結合前面if you take a bus 可知此處應該用第二人稱：you。

第四行：測試形容詞。此處應該和expensive并列，所以改為形容詞：quick。

第五行：測試形容詞和虛擬語氣。修飾人用tired。根據關鍵詞：suggested 可知句子中應用：should + go 而且should 可以省略。

第六行：測試連詞。在英語句子中：although和but 不能同時出現在同一個句中。所以把：but去掉。

第七行：測試省略和副詞。句子：while riding a bike （takes ）only half an hour ，其實屬于省略；better 本身屬于比較級，只能用much修飾。