Question

假設你是王明，本周是你們學校“環境保護宣傳周”，請根據下列提示的要點，為宣傳欄寫引言，介紹保護珍稀動物的情況。

[寫作內容] 

必要性	動物是人類親密的朋友，尤其是珍稀動物的存在使整個世界變得豐富多彩。
現狀	最近聽到甚至動物園里的珍稀動物都遭到人為傷害，深表震驚。
原因	有些人對保護動物認識不夠及對動物漠不關心。
措施	1.牢記保護珍稀動物是我們每個人的職責。 2. 應學習宣傳(publicize)其意義。

 [寫作要求]

1．請根據以上提示內容寫一篇短文，只能使用5個句子表達全部內容；

2．第一句已給出，不計入總句數。

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句子結構準確，信息內容完整，篇章結構連貫。

Animals are our close friends．                                                                                       

                                                                                                                                     

                                                                                                                                     

                                                                                                                                     

                                                                                                                                     

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Animals are our close friends. Without them，especially the rare species，the world would be too dull to live in．Unfortunately, we have heard recently that rare animals，even when kept in the zoo，couldn’t escape being hurt or killed，at which we can feel nothing but shocked．The reason is that some people lack understanding of the existence of these animals and don’t care for them．

Therefore，we should take active measures，studying and publicizing the information about rare animals．Keep in mind that protecting animals is protecting ourselves and thus it is our duty to do it well．

【解析】

試題分析：考查提綱類作文的寫作。話題是環境保護宣傳周，要點是以提綱的形式表示的，要適當增加細節，不能只是把要點翻譯成英語、，注意改變文章的樣式。難度在于選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實現同樣的目的。nfortunately, we have heard recently that rare animals，even when kept in the zoo，couldn’t escape being hurt or killed，at which we can feel nothing but shocked．這句話用了狀語從句的省略句型， The reason is that some people lack understanding of the existence of these animals and don’t care for them．

這句話是表語從句，還要使用合適的連接詞來連接各要點，使文章成為一個整體。象Therefore等等

考點：考查提綱類作文

點評：提綱類作文的關鍵在于表達方式的選擇和要點的完備，不能有遺漏或者省略。因為本文的要求是不能寫出提綱式，所以在寫作的時候要變換句式，不能一個句式一成不變，要給讀者全新的感覺。