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書面表達(dá)（滿分30分）

隨著生活節(jié)奏（pace of life）的加快和學(xué)習(xí)生活的日益緊張（stressful）,越來越多的人吃速食食品諸如方便面，腌制食品（preserved food/processed food）等來替代正餐。一方面，這些食品的確能夠節(jié)省時(shí)間，幫助大家更快完成工作和學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)，還是零售(retail)行業(yè)的一大支柱；另一方面，它們的安全性和營養(yǎng)性令人擔(dān)憂。請(qǐng)你以普通學(xué)生的身份對(duì)學(xué)校校報(bào)寫一篇討論如何對(duì)待速食食品的文章，內(nèi)容應(yīng)當(dāng)包括以下幾點(diǎn)：

1.速食食品的利弊

2.你的觀點(diǎn)

字?jǐn)?shù)以100字左右為宜。

Dear Editor,

Today, I contribute to our paper only wanting to talk about the fast food in our life._____________________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Editor,  

Today, I contribute to our paper only wanting to talk about the fast food in our life. Fast food is becoming more and more popular, especially among children and teenagers. Today, nothing is more representative of the fast pace of modern society than fast food. There are several reasons for its popularity. First, it is quick and convenient. You can satisfy your hunger instantly. Precious time won't be wasted in waiting-in-line to order or waiting at your table for your food to arrive. Second, its popularity is also attributed to the combined ingredients in them, which, the companies say, will do good to your health. 

However, I think that fast food isn't healthy enough because it does not compose a balanced diet and is low in nutrition. Doctors suggest that people should avoid eating too much fast food. Although home cooking is time-consuming and following washing-up tiresome, it offers healthy and delicious meals your body likes and needs. Fast food is only a good choice when you are in a hurry and we should turn to it only once in a while.

【解析】

試題分析：本文的寫作分三方面進(jìn)行寫作，首先對(duì)速食食品的流行進(jìn)行說明，對(duì)它的流行原因進(jìn)行說明，如它是方便快捷的it is quick and convenient.能夠節(jié)約你寶貴的時(shí)間，第二一些商家說這些食品對(duì)身體也是有益的，然后對(duì)速食食品的弊端進(jìn)行描寫，如沒有含有平衡的飲食not compose a balanced diet，營養(yǎng)不足is low in nutrition.最后表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)，盡管在家做飯是費(fèi)時(shí)的Although home cooking is time-consuming 但是它是健康有營養(yǎng)的，速食食品僅僅只是在你非常匆忙沒有時(shí)間的時(shí)候才吃Fast food is only a good choice when you are in a hurry and we should turn to it only once in a while.

考點(diǎn)：提綱類寫作

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文的寫作有一定難度，對(duì)于議論文文體，對(duì)文章的條理性要把握好，在寫作過程注意使用“起承轉(zhuǎn)合”的詞語或是句型表達(dá)，多使用被動(dòng)，倒裝、虛擬來提升作文的美度。在平時(shí)寫作時(shí)應(yīng)該多進(jìn)行閱讀，對(duì)閱讀過程中寫的好的表達(dá)要進(jìn)行積累，并且學(xué)以致用，勤積累，多背誦，這樣才能作文才能穩(wěn)步的提升。