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11．同學們即將進入高三備考階段，英語老師為了提高復習效率，向學生們征集好的學習方法．假如你叫李華，請根據以下提示，寫一篇短文，給出你己或者你認為好的學習方法：
1．制定好合適的復習計劃；
2．上課認真聽講、思考，仔細記筆記；
3．制定合理的休息時間，適當做體育鍛煉，放松自己，對高考要有一個積極的態度，不要太緊張；
4．可以向老師尋求幫助，得到老師們的鼓勵．
注意：詞數100詞左右，可適當增加細節以使行文連貫．（考生也可適當給出其他好的學習方法）．開頭已給出，不計詞數．
參考詞匯：college entrance examination 高考；positive attitude 積極的態度；encouragement 鼓勵；proper合適的
We will enter the stage of Senior Three soon．In order to improve the learning efficiency，we had better make a proper learning plan for ourselves．Besides，to get better results，it's wise to be very careful in class and tryour best to take notes all the time in the classroom．（高分句型一）
What's more，we shoud make a suitable timetable for us to rest，do some necessary exercise every day and relax ourselves．（高分句型二）In addition，we ought to remember to stay happy and have a positive attitude so that we can be energetic while preparing for the college entrance examination．Finally，we can ask our teachers for encouragement if we need their help．
In a word，I believe we will be admitted into our ideal universities，since we have worked hard for 3 years．（高分句型三） Our efforts will pay off．．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據提示信息    寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態、語態．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：In order to以便，為了；take notes記筆記；What's more而且；In addition另外；Finally最后；In a word總之；
Besides，to get better results，it's wise to be very careful in class and try our best to take notes all the time in the classroom．（高分句型一）
What's more，we shoud make a suitable timetable for us to rest，do some necessary exercise every day and relax ourselves．（高分句型二）
In a word，I believe we will be admitted into our ideal universities，since we have worked hard for 3 years．（高分句型三）

解答 We will enter the stage of Senior Three soon．In order to improve the learning efficiency，we had better make a proper learning plan for ourselves．Besides，to get better results，it's wise to be very careful in class and try our best to take notes all the time in the classroom．（高分句型一）
      What's more，we shoud make a suitable timetable for us to rest，do some necessary exercise every day and relax ourselves．（高分句型二）In addition，we ought to remember to stay happy and have a positive attitude so that we can be energetic while preparing for the college entrance examination．Finally，we can ask our teachers for encouragement if we need their help．
       In a word，I believe we will be admitted into our ideal universities，since we have worked hard for 3 years．（高分句型三） Our efforts will pay off．

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．