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9．一天，一位好心人為鳥做了一件大好事．請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖畫內(nèi)容，寫一篇100詞左右的小故事．記述這位好心人的所作所為．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于圖畫類作文，根據(jù)提示信息天，一位好心人為鳥做了一件大好事．請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖畫內(nèi)容，寫一篇100詞左右的小故事．記述這位好心人的所作所為  寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息2、圖畫是文章的總體框架，要在圖圖畫的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：cut down砍倒； kind-hearted 心地善良的；In fact事實(shí)上；In my opinion以我的觀點(diǎn)來(lái)看；carry away帶走
 There was a very tall tree，where some birds lived happily．（高分句型一）
Seeing the homeless birds，he felt sorry，so he made a wooden house for them，thinking he solved their problem，and carried the tree away．（高分句型二）
In my opinion，the best way to protect animals is to leave them as they are．（高分句型三）

解答 There was a very tall tree，where some birds lived happily．（高分句型一）The big tree provided homes for the birds and also benefited man very much．One day，a man wanted to make a beautiful house for himself．He cut down the trees，leaving the birds homeless．But he was a kind-hearted man．Seeing the homeless birds，he felt sorry，so he made a wooden house for them，thinking he solved their problem，and carried the tree away．（高分句型二） In fact，the wooden house would not help the birds because the man destroyed their living environment，too．In my opinion，the best way to protect animals is to leave them as they are．（高分句型三）Never disturb them and never destroy their surroundings!

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．