Question

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（A )，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\ )劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線（一），并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及修改均僅限一詞；

          2.只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

Some students thought that they can learn English well if they remember the grammar rules and learn by hearts as many words as they can. And I don’t quite agree with them. Learning rules from a grammar book and remember long lists of words are not enough. We must learn by listening            to, speaking, reading and writing. We should practice our spoken English both in and out class, and try to read and listen whenever possibly. This is also helpful to keep diaries and write letters or shortly stories in English. Only with this way can we learn English well.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Some students thought that they can learn English well if they remember the grammar rules and

             think             根據后面的can可知，謂語動詞應用一般現在時。

learn by hearts as many words as they can. And I don’t quite agree with them. Learning rules from

        heart                    But   learn sth. by heart是固定短語用心記牢…

                      根據后面的內容不同意他們的觀點，可只是轉折關系，故用but。

a grammar book and remember long lists of words are not enough. We must learn by listening to,

                  remembering  動名詞做主語，故用remembering.

                               listening 是不及物動詞，在沒有賓語2時，無需加to。

speaking, reading and writing. We should practice our spoken English both in and out class, and

                                                                    out后加 of

                            out是副詞，不是介詞，故加of。

try to read and listen whenever possibly. This is also helpful to keep diaries and write letters or

                          possible    It      Whenever possible=Whenever it is possible, 故需用形容詞。 It為形式主語，真正地主語為不定式，而this是不可以做形式主語的。

shortly stories in English. Only with this way can we learn English well.   

 short                     in            in this way用這種方法。

【解析】如上