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閱讀下面一則廣告，按照要求完成寫作任務。
ETL International English Summer Camp
Volunteer Wanted
EIL was funded in Britain in 1936 with the fundamental aim of international understanding“Learn to live together by living together”.
Requirements: Over 16; good knowledge of English; outgoing; working well with children between 7-12
Activities; Language study, outdoor recreation and travel
Campers; Students from different countries
Camp site; Mount Wuyi, Fujian
Time: July 26-August 9
Application deadline; July 15,2008
If interested, please e-mail to info@eiuk.org
[寫作內容]假設你是李華，這則廣告引起了你的興趣，請用英文寫一封自薦信。要點如下：
1.對夏令營主題的理解；2.根據招聘要求自我介紹；3.參加夏令營的目的。
注意：1.信的開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數；2.詞數120左右。
Dear Sir,
I’m Li Hua from Fujian.                                           
                                                                               
                                                                              
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                                     
                                                                                    
                                                                                  
                                                                                       
                                                                                    
                                                                                  
                                                                                   
                                                                                        
                                                                                     
                                                                                          
                                                                                       
                                                                                    
                                                                                  
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

One possible versionDear Sir,
I’m Li Hua from Fujian, When I was reading the advertisement, the aim of this activity impressed me greatly. I think it instructive to learn to live together by living together. It is a good opportunity for the only child like me to learn to share and work together. Therefore I recommend myself to you without hesitation.
As a boy of 17, I am outgoing, good at English and have experience of working well with children aged from 7 to 12. I think it is a kind of win-win activity. For one thing, I can help take care of the children. For another thing, I can improve my English, make more friends, and enrich my life during the summer vacation.
 I am looking forward to your early reply.
Sincerely yours,

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