Question

I like riding my bike. Though it is not very new, but it is    1.___________

my best friend. I find very convenient to go anywhere with a         2.___________

bike. Ride gives me not only exercise but also pleasure. I           3.___________

use my bike mostly on summer when the weather is warm          4.___________

and dry. It can very unpleasant in winter when it is cold and              5.___________

rain is pouring down. It can also be very danger. Of course         6.___________

I will be very careful on my bike. In facts, accidents are not         7.___________

the only problem. One day I went to school and come back               8.___________

to find his front wheel was missing. It was a long walk to           9.___________

the repairer’s shop. Now I have two strong locks.                      10.___________

Answer 1

1. 去掉 but。 漢語(yǔ)可說(shuō)“雖然……但是……”，但英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣上不能相應(yīng)地說(shuō) though…but…。(注：不能去掉 though，因?yàn)檫@樣還會(huì)涉及大小寫的改動(dòng)，而高考短文改錯(cuò)每行只允許改動(dòng)一處。)

2. find 后加 it。此 it 為形式賓語(yǔ)，真正的賓語(yǔ)是其后的不定式。

3. Ride 改為 Riding。動(dòng)詞原形不能用作主語(yǔ)，要改為動(dòng)名詞。

4. on 改為 in。表示在某個(gè)季節(jié)，用介詞in。

5. can 后加 be。此句缺謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。

6. danger 改為 dangerous。用形容詞作表語(yǔ)。

7. facts 改為 fact。in fact 為習(xí)語(yǔ)，意為“事實(shí)上”。

8. come 改為 came。came 與其前的 went 為并列謂語(yǔ)。

9. his 改為 my。前后使用代詞應(yīng)一致。

10. 此行無(wú)錯(cuò)。

解析:

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