閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。
A young man was complaining about his bad luck and poverty. He frowned (皺眉) all day. A wise old man came to him and said, “Hey, kid, why are you so unhappy?”
“I don’t understand why I'm so poor!” he replied.
“Poor? I think you are very wealthy!” the wise old man said sincerely.
The young man was puzzled, “Why do you say that?”
“Supposing someone offers you one thousand dollars to cut your finger off, would you do it?” “Of course not!” the young man replied.
“And ten thousand dollars to chop your leg off?” “Certainly not!”
“A hundred thousand dollars to scoop your eyes out?” “Surely not!”
“One million dollars to turn you into a 90-year-old man immediately?”
“Definitely not!”
“Ten million dollars to take your life right away?” “Absolutely not!”
The wise old man said with a smile, “So there you are. You already possess what is worth more than ten million dollars. Why are you still sad to be so poor?” After the young man listened to the wise old man's words, it started to become clear to him.
[寫作內容]
1. 以約30個詞概括文章的主要內容；
2．然后以“健康比金錢更重要”為題發表自己的，字數大約120左右，內容包括：
(1) 對話中這位年長智者的觀點是否正確，為什么?
(2) 健康與金錢的關系，并試舉例說明；
(3) 作為一名高中生，應該如何處理健康與金錢的關系。
[寫作要求]
1.在作文中可以使用自己親身的經歷或虛構的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2. 作文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱。
[評分標準]
概括準確，語言規范，內容合適，篇章連貫。
不唯一
Health is More Important than Money
A young man was always complaining about his poverty. However, only after a conversation with a wise old man did he realize wealth was not money but health.
I definitely approve the wise old man’s idea that the real wealth is our healthy body rather than enough money. My reason is that it is no use having enough money if we have no health body.
As for the relationship between health and money, in my opinion, health is more important than money. Without good health, it is impossible to do whatever you want to do. For example, supposing you are handicapped in wheelchair, even if you have a big sum of money, you can’t still travel all over the world and go wherever you want to go.
As a result, as a high school student, not only should we be concerned about our study, but we should also make more use of our time to do sports and do more body-buildings.
【解析】
試題分析：概括原文的大意不是縮寫，不能引用原文的語句，它也不是改寫，不能把原句加以變形就完事；主要是概括和抽象，把具體的信息用一些具有高度概括功能的詞和句表述出來。與原文某個或某些句子完全一致或大部分一致。有同學寫摘要就從原文的開頭部分、中間部分和結尾部分各抄一句，以為這就是“概要”，這種認識是錯誤的，這樣的“概要”是得不了分的。
考點：提綱式作文。
點評：好作文應該是緊扣文章主題，遵循特定的文體格式，選用恰當的語言合理組織文章結構，內容統一、連貫，語法、拼寫、標點正確，用詞恰當。為了避免太多單詞拼寫錯誤，語法錯誤，不要為了追求詞語的華麗而堆積一些自己也沒把握的單詞，不要刻意追求長句而寫一些自己不知對錯的有多個從句組成的長句。考試時最好選擇自己最有把握的詞匯，短語，句式。
科目：高中英語 來源：廣東省茂名市2010屆高三下學期第二次模擬考試 題型：寫作題
第二節：讀寫任務（共1個小題，滿分25分）
閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150左右的英語短文。
Mr. Rogerson, 51, the father of two girls and two boys, has taught teamowork among his children, with real money. Eight years ago, when they ranged in age from 5 to 13, he and his wife decided to give them $ 5,000 to make investment (投資) each year – for the family’s summer holiday. The more money they made, the more joy they could get on holiday.
In 2001 – a bad year for the stock market (股票市場). “They bought stocks. Their money went down from $ 5,000 to $ 2,000.” Mr. Rogerson said, “We went camping.”
During the second year, “They made $ 50,” he said. “That year we drove down to Florida to visit family.”
By the their year, the children earned $ 600 on their $ 5,000, and the family went to Disney World.
Mr. Rogerson said that the point of the experience – learning to work together to make intelligent decisions about money – is an important one and the effort has helped them discover their own talent. “We found that one boy showed great leadership and the other one was great with numbers,” he said. “Each had a different talent.”
【寫作內容】
學校最近組織了一次中美學生交流活動，你參加其中“團隊合作”的討論，你準備寫一份發言稿，內容要點包括：
1．以約30個詞概括材料中心內容：
2．然后以約120個詞就“團隊合作”為主題寫你的看法，內容包括：
（1）團隊合作的重要性，
（2）以你的親身經歷或他人的經歷證明團隊合作的重要性；
（3）你對團隊合作活動的建議。
【寫作要求】
1．可以使用實例或其它論述方法支持你的論點，也可以參照閱讀材料的內容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2．不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱。
【評分標準】
概括準確，語言規范，內容合適，篇章連貫
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科目：高中英語 來源：2012屆廣東省廣州市禺山高級中學高三第一次月考英語試卷 題型：寫作題
閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。
Michael is always in a good mood and always has something positive to say. When someone asks him how he is doing, he will reply, “If I were any better, I’d be twins!”
His style really made me curious, so one day I went up to Michael and asked him, “I don’t get it. You can’t be positive all the time. How do you do it?”
Michael replied, “Each morning I wake up and say to myself, ‘Mike, you can choose to be in a good mood or in a bad mood.’ I choose to be in a good mood. Each time something bad happens, I choose to learn from it. Every time someone comes to me complaining, I choose to point out the positive side of life.”
Then Michael added, “Life is all about choices. When you cut away all the junk, every situation is a choice. You choose how you react to situations. You choose how people will affect your mood. You choose to be in a good mood or bad mood. The bottom line is: It’s your choice how you live your life.” I reflected on what Michael said. And I learn from him that every day we can choose to live fully. Attitude is everything.
【寫作內容】
(1) 以約30個詞概括短文的要點；
(2) 然后以約120個詞寫一篇記敘文，描寫你或你的朋友遭遇困境的一次經歷，并包括以下要點：
①敘述你或你的朋友曾經遭遇的某個困境；
②你或你的朋友是如何對待困難的；
③你或你的朋友的態度對解決問題起了什么作用？
【寫作要求】
1.作文中可以使用親身經歷或虛構的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
2.作文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱。
【評分標準】
概括準確，語言規范，內容合適，語句連貫。
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科目：高中英語 來源：2014屆廣東深圳高級中學高三上期第一次月考英語卷（解析版） 題型：書面表達
閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。
Scientists find that hard-working people live longer than average men and women. Career women are healthier than housewives. Evidence shows that the jobless are in poorer health than the job-holders. A study shows that whenever the employment rate increases by 1%, the death rate decreases correspondingly(相應地) by 2%. All this comes down to one point: work is helpful to health.
Why is work good for health? It is because work keeps people busy, away from loneliness. Researches show that people feel unhappy, worried and lonely when they have nothing to do. Instead, the happiest are those who are busy. Work serves as a bridge between man and reality. By work, people come into contact with each other. By collective activities, they find friendship and warmth. This is helpful to health. The loss of work means the loss of everything. It affects man spiritually and makes him likely to disease.
Besides, work gives one a sense of fulfillment and a sense of achievement. Work makes one feel his value and status in society. When a writer finishes his writing or a teacher sees his students grow, they are happy beyond words.
[寫作內容]
1.以約30個詞概括短文的要點；
2.然后以約120個詞就“努力學習，快樂生活”的主題發表看法，并包括如下要點：
(1)你贊同“努力學習也可以快樂生活”這一觀點嗎？簡要闡述理由。
(2)舉例說明你的同學是如何努力學習并保持健康樂觀的心態的？
(3)簡述如何才能做到努力學習并快樂生活？
[寫作要求]
1. 在作文中可以使用自己親身的經歷或虛構的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2. 作文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱。
[評分標準] 概括準確，語言規范，內容合適，篇章連貫。
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科目：高中英語 來源：2010年河南省高一下學期期中考試英語 題型：填空題
閱讀下面的短文，然后從A-F選項中，為每一小段選擇合適的標題, 并把答案寫在答案卷上。
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A. The most common problem is a “wandering” mind B. Selective listening is also a mental barrier C. Listening isn’t an easy skill to master D. Attitude can also influence good listening E. Noise and background music makes listening more difficult F. Listening is also related to the level of the listener’s knowledge |
1._____________
Listening is not as easy as someone thought. Even good listeners may recall only fifty percent of what they hear. Retention, the ability to remember and recall information, decreases about twenty to twenty-five percent after a few days. So no matter how well you listen in class, you’re always going to have to refresh your memory before a test! Unfortunately, many people have poor listening habits, and little listening training. To improve your listening skills, it’s important to understand what causes poor listening.
2.___________
If you find it difficult to concentrate solely on what a speaker is saying, there’s a good reason. The mind processes information much faster than a speaker can speak. The brain can process over 500 words per minute, while the average speaker talks at a rate of 124 to 250 words per minute. That means the mind can hear what’s being said and can think about something else at the same time.
3.____________
If you have a negative idea about the speaker or the topic, you’ll find it difficult to listen attentively. Hostile or captive audiences often have more difficultly listening than do favorable or voluntary ones.
4.____________
If a speaker speaks “above the heads” of an audience, people find it difficult to concentrate. Speakers who use unfamiliar words or who use incomplete explanations make it more difficult to listen. Speakers who “speak down” to audiences, failing to acknowledge what the audience already knows, also create mental blocks.
5.___________
When people listen selectively, they simply block out what they don’t want to hear. For instance, many people have habits that are dangerous to their health, like smoking. However, they often choose to block out what a speaker says about health risks. They may listen to a speech and think that the speaker’s message applies to other people, not them. In other words, they hear what they want to hear and ignore what they don’t want to hear.
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科目：高中英語 來源：2010屆廣東省高三下學期綜合測試（三） 題型：書面表達
第二節讀寫任務(共1小題，滿分25分)
閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。
Doctors say anger can be an extremely harmful emotion, unless you learn how to deal with it. They warn that angry feelings can lead to heart disease, stomach
problems, headaches, emotional problems and possibly cancer.
Anger is a normal emotion that we all feel from time to time. Some people
express anger openly in a calm, reasonable way. Others burst with anger, losing
control of themselves. But still other people control their anger. They cannot or will not express it.
Recently some doctors have found that people who express anger too often and
violently become, in fact, more and not less angry. This can cause medical problems.
Some doctors say that both controlling and expressing anger can be dangerous. They
believe that those who express anger strongly may be more likely to develop heart
disease, and they believe that those who deep their anger inside may face a greater
danger of high blood pressure.
Doctors say the solution is learning how to deal with anger. They say the first
step is to admit that you are angry and to recognize the real cause of the anger, then decide if the cause is serious enough to get angry about. If it is, they say, "Do not express your anger while angry. Wait until your anger has cooled down and you are able to express yourself calmly and reasonably. "
【寫作內容】
1、以約30個詞概括這段短文內容；
2、然后以約120個詞就“生氣不好”這個主題發表你的看法，并包括以下要點：
(1)發脾氣的害處；
(2)遇到不愉快的事兒時，如何避免生氣；
(3)生氣時，如何恰當宣泄情緒。
【寫作要求】
1、可以參照閱讀材料但不得直接引用原文的句子；
2、作文中不得出現真實的姓名和學校名稱。
【評分標準】
概括準確，語言規范，內容合適，篇章連貫。
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