Question

4．假設你是李華．美國一所友好學校準備與你們學校共同創辦一份中學生英文刊物，該校格林先生來信詢問有關情況．請你給他寫封回信，主要內容如下：
*表示贊成．
*提出你喜歡的欄目．
*簡要說明理由．
注意
1．詞數100左右．
2．信的開頭和結尾已為你寫好．
3．適當增加細節，以使行文連貫．
4．參考詞匯：欄目一column
June 8
Dear Mr．Green，
I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together
It is indeed a wonderful idea and everyone hopes for its success．
I would like the magazine to have three columns：News，Teachers'Advice and Students'Voice．From the News column we can learn about what is going on in both of our schools．In Teachers'Advice，our teachers can give us such help as we may not be able to get in the classroom．Students'Voice will allow us to freely express our thoughts and feelings about our lives and studies．
Yours faithfully
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認真審題，找準提示語中的關鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據關鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡3． 準確定位人稱、時態．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
高分句型一：
In Teachers'Advice，our teachers  can give us such help as we may not be able to get in the classroom
因為老師的建議，老師能給我們這樣的幫助，可能是無法在課堂上得到的．
高分句型二：
 I believe that this magazine will surely strengthen our ties，and I am looking forward to reading it．
我相信這本雜志一定會加強我們之間的聯系，我期待著閱讀它．

解答 Dear Mr．Green，
     I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together．It is indeed a wonderful idea and everyone hopes for its success．
     I would like the magazine to have three columns：News，Teachers'Advice and Students'Voice．From the News column we can learn about what is going on in both of our schools．In Teachers'Advice，our teachers  can give us such help as we may not be able to get in the classroom（高分句型一）．Students'Voice will allow us to freely express our thoughts and feelings about our lives and studies．
     I believe that this magazine will surely strengthen our ties，and I am looking forward to reading it（高分句型二）．
                                                                                                                                   Yours faithfully，
                                                                                                                                    Li Hu

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎進行思維和聯想，自由發揮．不僅考查學生在內容、結構安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學生的想像力、發散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．