Question

第一節：短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在下面加上該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

This morning I went to a nearby food store to buy some breads. After the man in the store packing the bread in a small bag for me, I began to walk home with bag in my hand. On the way I met my next-door neighbor, Miss Wang, that was walking her dog .We greeted with each other and begin to talk about the weather. As we were talking, his dog came up at the bag in my hand though the bread gave off a delicious smell. As a result, some of the bread fell to the ground or the dog began to enjoy it. Five minutes late, I was back at the store to buy bread again.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 breads→bread

 packing→packed

 with 后加 the

 that→who

 with去掉

 begin→began

 his→her

 though→because/ as / for/since

 or→and

 late→later

【解析】

試題分析：本文敘述了作者在買了面包回家的路上，結果在回家的路上碰見了鄰居在遛狗，他們談論了一會兒，這時狗聞到了面包的味道，結果最后把面包給吃掉了，作者沒有辦法，又去商店買了一些面包。

 I went to a nearby food store to buy some breads.中 bread是不可數名詞，沒有復數形式，所以把breads改為bread。

 After the man in the store packing the bread 。句中缺少謂語動詞，而且文章敘述過去的事情，所以把packing改為過去式packed 。

 I began to walk home with bag in my hand. 其中 bag 為可數名詞，并且是指前面提到過的bag，所以 with 后加定冠詞the表示特指。

 Miss Wang, that was walking her dog . Miss Wang 后應該是非限制性定語從句，that不引導非限制性定語從句，所以把that改為who。

 We greeted with each other .  greet是及物動詞，后面直接跟賓語，所以去掉with。

 We greeted with each other and begin to talk about the weather.句中begin 和greeted 是并列謂語，全文用過去時，所以begin改為過去式began。

 his dog came up at the bag文中是指Miss Wang 在遛狗，人稱指代錯誤，所以 把his改為her。

 though the bread gave off a delicious smell句中指面包發出的味道引的狗竄上來，是因果關系，所以though改為because/ as / for/since。

 or the dog began to enjoy it 面包掉在地上和狗開始吃應該是順承關系，所以or改為and。

 Five minutes late固定短語“多久后”應該用時間段+later，所以 late改為later。

考點：短文改錯。