Question

下面是對中學(xué)生對志愿者工作的看法的調(diào)查表，請根據(jù)下面所給的信息寫一篇英語小短文討論中學(xué)生是否應(yīng)該參加志愿者活動（voluntary work）。題目自擬，字?jǐn)?shù)100左右。

70%的學(xué)生贊成參加志愿者活動	為社會作貢獻(xiàn)，幫助別人是一件很有意義的工作，帶來很多個人利益，為日后的工作獲得寶貴的技能和經(jīng)驗(yàn)，為自己創(chuàng)造機(jī)遇，增強(qiáng)信心、自覺意識、良好的交際能力和領(lǐng)導(dǎo)才能
25%的學(xué)生不愿意從事志愿者活動	無報酬，浪費(fèi)時間，耽誤學(xué)習(xí)
5%的學(xué)生無明確態(tài)度	漠不關(guān)心

 

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Different students have different attitudes toward voluntary work.
70% of the students approve of doing voluntary work. They consider that it can make a contribution to society and that it is a worthwhile job to help others. It can also bring personal benefits and will contribute to their future because they can gain valuable experience and skills for their future career. Voluntary work often opens up opportunities for them, build up confidence, self-awareness, good communication skills and leadership ability.
25% of the students disapprove of doing voluntary work. They think the work is done without payment and it is a waste of time. The rest of the students don’t have clear attitudes towards it, nor do they care about it.
I think each of us should make a contribution to society. No matter how small it is, it will help make a difference.
Peter

解析試題分析：拿到作文題目，首先要認(rèn)真審題，這是一篇提綱作文，下面是對中學(xué)生對志愿者工作的看法的調(diào)查表，請根據(jù)下面所給的信息寫一篇英語小短文討論中學(xué)生是否應(yīng)該參加志愿者活動（voluntary work）。所以要用一般現(xiàn)在時來寫。需要寫的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)以表格形式給出，但是寫作時不要僅僅對要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時注意題目要求字?jǐn)?shù)100詞左右。
考點(diǎn)：提綱作文
點(diǎn)評：本文屬于提綱作文，動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。