Question

春天是旅游的好季節(jié)，某中學(xué)校長(zhǎng)要求各班同學(xué)就春游一事展開討論。討論的主題是：學(xué)校要不要組織學(xué)生春游。校長(zhǎng)還要求班長(zhǎng)就討論的情況用英語(yǔ)寫一封信給他。
假定你是某班班長(zhǎng)李華，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列表格中的信息客觀地介紹討論情況。
注意：1．信的格式已為你寫好；            2．詞數(shù)：120字左右；
3．生詞：拓寬 broaden    負(fù)擔(dān) burden
70％的學(xué)生贊成春游
1．可以領(lǐng)略大自然的優(yōu)美風(fēng)景；      2．拓寬視野，增長(zhǎng)知識(shí)；
3．呼吸新鮮空氣,有益于身體健康。
30％的學(xué)生反對(duì)春游
1．時(shí)間緊，耽誤學(xué)習(xí)；             2．增加父母經(jīng)濟(jì)負(fù)擔(dān)；
3．擔(dān)心安全。
Dear Headmaster,
I’m writing to tell you the discussion we’ve had on whether the school should organize a spring outing for the students.
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
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Yours truly,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Headmaster,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had on whether the school should organize a spring outing for the students.
Opinions on the question are divided as follows: 70％ of the students think that the school should organize the spring outing. They believe that the spring outing can make them enjoy the beautiful scenery of nature, which can broaden our vision and fill us with more knowledge. They also say that the air in the open fields is fresher. What’s more, fresh air does a lot of good to our health.
On the other hand, the rest don’t like the idea of going out for a spring outing. In their opinion, time is very precious, so they have to grasp every minute to work hard at their lessons. Travelling costs much money. In that case, it will add to their families’ burden. Above all, no one can be sure of the safety of every student.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly
Li Hua

解析試題分析：考查正反觀點(diǎn)類議論文。本文討論的話題為：學(xué)校要不要組織學(xué)生春游；給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。
考點(diǎn)：考查正反觀點(diǎn)類議論文寫作
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文題型是考生非常熟悉的正反觀點(diǎn)類的議論文，在平時(shí)的練習(xí)中也有相應(yīng)的模板。審題時(shí)注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱以第三人稱為主，發(fā)表個(gè)人意見時(shí)使用第一人稱。本文的要點(diǎn)均已給出，考生需要使用合適的連接詞把孤立的要點(diǎn)聯(lián)系成文。如for one thing, for another; besides, firstly, secondly, last but not least等。也要使用一些高級(jí)的詞匯詞組如 be supposed to do sth, benefit 等以提升文章的檔次分。在文章紅可以適當(dāng)使用一至兩句諺語(yǔ)如：Every coin has two sides等可以大大提高文章的文采，提高獲得高分的可能性。